How Could You Trust/Love Me...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

How could you trust/love...

How could you trust me ever again
How could you ever love me again
Just tell me how, I mean I've put you through so much pain
I'm keeping you from being sane

I'm sorry but I feel I must leave
So I hope I cause you no grief
Please?
I don't want to but I must, I mean I'm just... I mean I just want you to have peace

Peace by not me
Please meaning please look the other way so you don't see
This is my plea
I'm down on my knees

I'm sorry but goodbye
It's for the best, I would try
To at least never, to you, lie
I must go die


Submitted: December 05, 2014

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quetzala

sad poem maybe if what it is your doing is causing the one you love pain leaving her in the dust isnt the answer but instead a conquest for change. why would you just leave? that sounds kindda lazy to me.

Fri, December 5th, 2014 6:47pm

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ok well I'm leaving family and not trying to explain myself but just leave bc the people I love already want me to leave anyways.

Fri, December 5th, 2014 4:29pm

Chibica

Sad poem... I liked how it was simply that one message you were trying to convey and that you focused on that. I feel like you had to force the rhyming though. In my opinion it's better to watch the flow (the syllable count, the iambs) than to focus on rhyming. That way it's easier to read n.n
Poems are really short, and the fact that you were able to bring out emotions in a reader's mind in such little words is already a great accomplishment. I won't say this is perfect, but it's certainly not bad. Continue to write and you'll get better by the day for sure! As long as you're having fun :3

Mon, December 15th, 2014 9:03am

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Thank you SO much. And trust me I will keep writing.

Mon, December 15th, 2014 4:13am

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