Poem by: Saaya
Submitted: November 20, 2011
....Painted ,tainted trees
Under the cloudy canvas
.....On puddled palette
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Shortest poem I have ever read on booksie!! :)
I love rain, and luckily it rains a lot in my city!:)
Love the expressions you have used!
It's am euphoric feeling to see the trains getting drenched in the rain, like they are in a dance..,
The clouds are as beautiful as ever, like an artist's canvas! On a Puddled palette as you describe it...:)
But Why just 3 lines....:( I so wish there was more...:( :(
I meant trees not trains...lol!
Saleem Akhtar Malik
When combined with the sequel Rainy 2 it expresses the richness of your imagination. A wonderful poem. I like it.
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