Something filthy about Mr.Haynes
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Book by: sabsab73
Table of Contents
Submitted: July 17, 2015
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What i do with girls in dark alley
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I've never made love out of love
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The hit, that lured me into his bed
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The least bit of fun or massacre in Louisiana
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I long for the monster, afterall
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Today is going to be different
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Late night's presents. Part II
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how to creative talk with your enemy
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Recent Comments
Wow, I just read this chapter and your story seems really interesting. I want to try reading from the start. I'm also writing a story at the moment called "Diary of a Soul in the Underworld" it might be your style.
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Thank you for the amazing comment. Yes,u should read from the start,because you won't understand it other way, what's happening and so on, sometimes it's getting difficult to keep up. I'll read yours as well. X
Of course I write long chapters too, haha. But I like to make sure that it's around 10 pages, haha. This is only my opinion though, so don't think you have to shorten a lot on your chapters just because one person said this. I still enjoyed the chapter, no doubt. Haha, anyway, keep me updated on your work, I like what's going on in this story. :)
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Thank you very much! Xxx
I'm sorry it took me so long to comment.
Anyway, you got some good things happening in this chapter, beautiful and horrible at the same time. I was pretty heartbroken and happy at the same time while reading this. You put quite a bit of emotion into this chapter.
Note: It's fine to have a long chapter, but you might want to be careful of how long it is though, if it's 20 pages approximate when uploading on here, it's kind of hard to keep up.
But anyway, great job and I will be looking forward to reading more. :)
Your writing is quite poetic at times... I'm not always entirely sure what's going on but you manage to create moods and emotions very effectively. You might want to have a quick check through for spelling, punctuation etc. but generally it was good.
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Hello, Amy! Thank a lot for your comment! I'd like to tell you what's really going on, but it would spoil the fun. Everything is becoming more clear with every chapter, so if u read further,u would understand everything soon. BTW, English is not my language really, so u might figured- i'm not very good with spelling, since my native language is Lithuanian. I bet u don't even know this country lol :) but i'm really really trying! X
when he's finally will kidnap serene???????/ update!!! plz plz
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Very soon :)
Can't wait to see what happens next. This is really sad and beautiful
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Thank you! at least someone is enjoying this, lol
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