waiting so long

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

written on new year's eve, in apprehension of the coming year and relationships it will bring

 

new year

cigarette and thinking

about you

park and the rolling stones

I want to call 

but for some reason

I can’t

I’m scared and sad

as if I’m not ready 

yet

not ready for this yet

what will happen?

I want to call 

but I can’t

I’m not in love

I’m shaking, small

‘beautiful day...’ ironic

I’ve had a horrible day

ache ache ache

body shakes

I’ve wanted to see you

for so long

break don’t break

I’m not calm

I’m not strong

the world is shaking

the world is shaking me

it’s burning red

mean, mean red

 

A hundred songs fighting

a hundred tears hiding

I’m not calm and I

don’t want to say that

smoking helps me write

I’m shaking, shaking

waiting, waiting

I’ve been waiting so long.


Submitted: January 02, 2012

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writersbug

I can tell this is a very personal piece for you; it's full of emotion, which I think is the best way to write, because it comes purely from the heart. Very nice work!!

Thu, January 12th, 2012 12:44am

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this along with 'new year's eve' is one of the most raw pieces of writing that i've publicised as something that i actually tink is worth reading. it is a very personal piece and it is so great to hear that it comes across that way. thankyou for your comment

Wed, January 11th, 2012 4:49pm

Wu Lang

i can relate to this poem...just remember what i've been doing when i'm hurt...loving someone who loves somebody.it's a torture...it feels like my heart want to explode and bcoz of too much thinking...i got headache after...so just like you...writing what i feel at the moment or just voice out by the way of writing it.really it helps a lot...i feel so good and refresh.love it.keep on writing...kmu.have a nice day.

Fri, January 13th, 2012 8:01am

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thankyou, i will.

Sat, January 14th, 2012 5:45pm

vampgirl

yep yep soo dep nd pure personal pain nd feeling i love the rhyming.........keep it gng on...

Mon, January 16th, 2012 2:47pm

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thanks. I think I will keep it going on =]

Wed, January 25th, 2012 2:45am

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