new year
cigarette and thinking
about you
park and the rolling stones
I want to call
but for some reason
I can’t
I’m scared and sad
as if I’m not ready
yet
not ready for this yet
what will happen?
I want to call
but I can’t
I’m not in love
I’m shaking, small
‘beautiful day...’ ironic
I’ve had a horrible day
ache ache ache
body shakes
I’ve wanted to see you
for so long
break don’t break
I’m not calm
I’m not strong
the world is shaking
the world is shaking me
it’s burning red
mean, mean red
A hundred songs fighting
a hundred tears hiding
I’m not calm and I
don’t want to say that
smoking helps me write
I’m shaking, shaking
waiting, waiting
I’ve been waiting so long.
Submitted: January 02, 2012
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i can relate to this poem...just remember what i've been doing when i'm hurt...loving someone who loves somebody.it's a torture...it feels like my heart want to explode and bcoz of too much thinking...i got headache after...so just like you...writing what i feel at the moment or just voice out by the way of writing it.really it helps a lot...i feel so good and refresh.love it.keep on writing...kmu.have a nice day.
Fri, January 13th, 2012 8:01amyep yep soo dep nd pure personal pain nd feeling i love the rhyming.........keep it gng on...
Mon, January 16th, 2012 2:47pmFacebook Comments
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I can tell this is a very personal piece for you; it's full of emotion, which I think is the best way to write, because it comes purely from the heart. Very nice work!!
Thu, January 12th, 2012 12:44amAuthor
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this along with 'new year's eve' is one of the most raw pieces of writing that i've publicised as something that i actually tink is worth reading. it is a very personal piece and it is so great to hear that it comes across that way. thankyou for your comment
Wed, January 11th, 2012 4:49pm