Mommy Please!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
Mommy save me, please I'm begging you, SAVE ME!

Submitted: November 08, 2014

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Submitted: November 08, 2014

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My name is Bobbie. I am eight years old, rather petite in my opinion and I'm in the third grade. My classes are fairly easy but my classmates are extremely rude. All of them ignore me even though I'm right in front of them. Sometimes I wave. Sometimes I say hi. But I'm still ignored even when I'm trying my best to fit in like mommy wanted me to. Is it because of my flaming red hair? Or maybe it's because of my icy blue eyes? I want to make friends I really do, I'm even willing to change for that. I even wanted to be friends with Amy but she ignores me every time I try to talk to her. The class ignores me, the teacher treats me like a ghost, I just don't get it. I mean did I do something wrong? I stand in front of the teacher begging her to acknowledge me but she just walks right through me. I raise my hand during class time, I know the answer yet the teacher calls on the girl next to me. It pisses me off! I'm right here! I'm right in front of you! Acknowledge me dammit! Glass drops in front of me, the class is squealing in horror, some with delight. I look up, the bulbs were gone. Did the glass come from those? The bell rings, still no one acknowledges me. School is over and kids my age walk past me like I'm sort of tumbleweed. I'm here, I'M HERE! I walk through the same blinding walls as everyone else. My feet touch these awful brown floors just like yours. I see the same bland doors. So why!? Why can't any of you see me! The lights flicker, my soul is seething with rage. Standing in front of  the school I wait for my mother to pick me up, it's cold and it's getting late. The sun sets slowly like a snail trying to win a race against a turtle. She'll come, she has to come! Momma promised to pick me up today. She promised me that she'd be here! I look down at the concrete, my feet are gone. She'll come, don't worry she'll come like she always does. Momma might be a little late but she promised. She promised she would come! The ground cracked, lava bubbled from the pits of hell. Momma's going to come! I can't go, you can't make me! Chains spewed from the cracks, swirled in thin air with eerie laughter. "Your soul is mine child, there's no heaven for you!" She's coming to pick me up, I can't leave, I won't leave! Chains latched onto my skin scorching it with its unbearable heat. Mommy please! I'm begging you, please come pick me up, please be on time, I'm scared mommy, I'm scared! Please don't let them take me, please mommy, PLEASE! Why won't you answer me mommy? These chains, they're taking me away from you! "Hell will love your soul!" Mommy... Please mommy, please...


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