A Girl Has Committed a Suicide!!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

fictional Poem though it might happen to anyone.

"feel free to criticize all my works, I wont improve if you didn't"

you see.. everyone of us has someone 
who are really precious for us and we think they are the one 

we meet, we kiss , and we make love
and you think within yourself this person is a gift from above

but all the sudden they disappear 
and you look for a reason but its not clear

you ask and wonder what has gone wrong ?
why didn't he call? why didn't he take me along?

why did he leave me in despair ?
why do I have to know that he is having an affair?

was not I good enough for him? probably because I wasn't smart
maybe I was not beautiful from the start 

Maybe this and maybe that ...
I think because I am fat... 

and you start taking diet pill
and know, your esteem is what you are trying to kill 

long days you girls have cried 
and the next morning we have to here,
"a girl has committed a suicide"

"nobody cares about me" we found in your notes
the last note from you with blood you wrote

but let me tell you girls
no matter how you look like 
your beauty is of million pearls

nobody leaves you because you are not beautiful or smart
but he was not planning to be committed to you from the start

so you ran into the wrong guy
and because of him you had to cry 

so raise your head, you are a queen
stand strong and don't be lean

there are others wishing to be at your side 
you might not notice them 
but they wishing you to be their bride 

don't look down on yourself your are strong
don't throw yourself to guys who think of you as their belongs

don't reveal yourself to attract attention 
don't be a doll for a social conventions 

in this world you have to be wary
do respect yourself and do follow Steps of Mary

the best woman on earth god has mentioned 
about her goodness, none will come to dissension

Submitted: December 15, 2014

© Copyright 2021 Salem Omar Dhafer . All rights reserved.

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Ben A Vanguarde

Well written with a powerful message. Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.

Mon, December 15th, 2014 11:24am


Thank you

Mon, December 15th, 2014 3:39am


Very well written and emotional. I relate to every word you have said. Having suicidal thoughts really do kill you. Its not suicide itself,its the thoughts that destroy you.

Wed, March 11th, 2015 4:53pm


thanx for your read

Sun, April 26th, 2015 2:02am

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