CRYING EYES,BROKEN HEART

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

CRYING EYES BROKEN HEART is a poem for people who have lost hope in life read it u might get some inspiration i suppose thank you [^_^]

 CRYING EYES,BROKEN HEART

 

CRYING EYES,BROKEN HEART 

ARE MEANT TO GIVE A NEW START

CRYING IS CHOICE BUT, BEING STRONG IS LAST OPTION

LIGHT IN YOU WILL BE YOUR WEAPON...

 

 

LIKE A SOILDER YOU CAN FIGHT...

  BE STRONG AND EVERYTHING GOES RIGHT,

  THIS TIME NOTHING CAN BREAK YOU APART,

 LOOK AT THE BULL'S EYE AND SHOOT YOUR DART

 

 

 YOU'LL NEVER HAVE A SECOND CHANCE 

ITS YOUR LIFE YOU'LL HAVE TO ENHNACE 

TRY ONE LAST TIME AND EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE

 

BECAUSE

 

 CRYING EYES AND BROKEN HEART 

ARE MEANT TO GIVE A NEW START...

[^_^]

I HOPE U LIKE IT... :)

 


Submitted: December 17, 2013

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myheavenmyworld

yes! i liked it ! its very inpirational.

Tue, December 17th, 2013 12:57pm

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thank you so much :)

Tue, December 17th, 2013 5:52am

LynetteSphls

i liked it, good job.

Wed, December 18th, 2013 3:22am

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thank you so much ur comment means a lot to me [^_^]

Wed, December 18th, 2013 12:25am

Complicated Girl

Good poetry. Very inspiring. I liked the last line very much and the rhyming scheme is also good...:)

Thu, January 2nd, 2014 2:55pm

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thank u (^_^)

Fri, January 3rd, 2014 4:07am

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