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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


Floating on a cloud living in a dream,
 the reality I see it's not what it may seem.

 Floating on air living in this haze,
 chasing  myself around this never ending maze.

 Floating on a chance living in a bubble,
 Don't try and burst it now, this will only bring such trouble.

 Floating on the magic living under a spell,
 tied and bound by circumstance, I'm caught up in this hell.

 Floating on a fantasy living in the mist,
 trying to avoid temptation I need to stop and resist.

 Floating on a memory living in the shade,
 Looking back I think of these memories as they fade.


Submitted: August 09, 2015

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woahhh trippy. you descriptions were surreal and hazy (but like a good hazy)and I like the vibe the poem gives off. I particularly liked the last couplet, and I liked the way the separate stanzas fitted together.

Mon, August 10th, 2015 6:46pm

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