Was it the real victory?

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poem itself says it all

Submitted: August 06, 2013

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Was it the real victory?

By no means hurt him so much

That he questions his own existence.

In no way ridicule him down to such an extent

That he begins to disgust himself.

Not in the slightest you shall be the reason,

For his tears dropping down.

Don’t go by that false smile on the face,

Look inside the person’s eyes, his heart,

The shattered hopes and zero support you’ll see.

 The real victory lies  in holding up the ones who need it.

And if you don’t-

You might win for a moment or two, but you’lllose the person forever~

Real Victory

By no means hurt him so much

That he questions his own existence.

In no way ridicule him down to such an extent

That he begins to disgust himself.

Not in the slightest you shall be the reason,

For his tears dropping down.

Don’t go by that false smile on the face,

Look inside the person’s eyes, his heart,

The shattered hopes and zero support you’ll see.

 The real victory lies  in holding up the ones who need it.

And if you don’t-

You might win for a moment or two, but you’lllose the person forever~


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