It about me n my hobby of writing my feelings in form of poem in my mobile

 

Wrote so many poems,

Wrote so many things,

Tried to write on so many topics,

Finding your resemblance in everything I wrote,

I didn’t dared to store,

I didn’t dared to publish,

 

Unknowingly those were bestest of me,

Those were about you,

Those were for me,

Though I always enjoyed writing for u,

U there or u gone away from me,

I didn’t dared to store,

I didn’t dared to publish,

 

Describing awesomest things  of every girl I had being with,

Silky hair, bitchy name, seducing figure, attractive chik, smiling beauty,  

The more I wrote the more phrases I get,

Questioning myself whom was I writing for,

I didn’t dared to store,

I didn’t dared to publish,

 

I was always stable,

N i always will be,

Knowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,

loosing me the worstest feeling always be,

Having me will be the awesomest thing to be,

caring for your stableness,

I didn’t dared to store,

I didn’t dared to publish,

 

Writing about you never made me low,

Just fearing about people I never showed,

Those were for me,

Those were bestest of me,

So,

I didn’t dared to store,

I didn’t dared to publish………………………..

Those were for me,

Those were bestest of me .. J J J

 

----- > Sandesh Bhagwat….


Submitted: December 28, 2011

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jasmine maggo

i liked ur poem...wow!wat a feeling????
a person who is in deep love can only write this poem...

Thu, January 5th, 2012 12:43pm

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hmmm ... thanx :-)

Sun, January 15th, 2012 9:16pm

sandeshb8

:) .... thanx...

Thu, January 5th, 2012 12:46pm

Shadows of Memories

a good try and well expressed. a small correction :it will be "I didn't DARE to...." and not "..DARED to.." keep writing more. a nice go :)

Fri, January 20th, 2012 10:05am

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:) thanx...

Fri, January 20th, 2012 2:07am

Shadows of Memories

would love to get ur feedbacks on my creations too as well.thanks :)

Fri, January 20th, 2012 10:10am

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yaa sure sure.. will read as i get time .. chalega ??

Fri, January 20th, 2012 2:11am

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