Branches held high

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

No matter what happens, your family will be their by your side the whole time.

Sitting there on the side of the road with no foe or friends,

Everyone else is filled with joy and laughter,

Feels no joy or fear,

Is rejected at every corner,

The tree has nothing, nothing at all,

but...

his family;thats the reason why he still stands with his branches held high,

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p.s

just trying to state that more than anything in the world family is the most important:)

Written by Sangbang:)

 

 


Submitted: October 03, 2012

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The Introvert

Interesting.
But the tree is probably at least a half mile from its parents and its siblings. That's just how trees work.
Are its leaves its family?

Wed, October 3rd, 2012 9:58pm

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If it's a dumb poem you can just tell me
...
Good or bad?

Wed, October 3rd, 2012 9:07pm

babyblue

..............

Sat, October 6th, 2012 11:38pm

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So is it good or bad?

Sat, October 6th, 2012 4:43pm

Ava Rosien

I read that the tree and all its branches are a family and always there. Just as we humans have a "family tree" that branches off; but always remain as a family.

I liked it! :)

Mon, November 26th, 2012 2:00am

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Thanks:)

Sun, November 25th, 2012 9:09pm

Spyguy

E-mail me; Jspyguy@yahoo.com I have a few ideas for you... If you think you'd want them. I do think you've got something here... Please take the time to finish it...

Fri, December 28th, 2012 12:29pm

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Thanks,but I am fine.

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 10:26pm

trustmeimthedoctor

This is lovely. An important point to make, and written well. I'd love it if you could check my poetry out, but if you don't have time, hating okay. :)

Tue, January 8th, 2013 1:09am

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Thankyou so much,
Yes I will see yours:)

Mon, January 7th, 2013 5:50pm

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