everything is in the hands of the supreme power.humans are faighting in vain for wealth etc

priceless people living in the public

but their pugmarks are not being published

they frustated and forced every inch

however,trying their best for the thurst.

THEY tread down them every now and then

'coz the time is going to fill one,s fame.

but it is the time for best,

to do something better than the rest

and to become the highest in the next

as the time may not come furthest

start on your valuable vehicle of victorian heart

and move ahead with full speed,though the way is long

you may have to slow down your vehicle,as the breakers come

but think,it is your rest,don't calm down.

Submitted: September 19, 2012

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Good work, deep and thoughtful, please correct second last line's word 'breaker'. Keep writing :))

Thu, December 27th, 2012 10:23am


thank you ashi you read and pleased and replied my work. and became my fan. thank you so much. and i would continue to read you.now onwords.i hope yiu too.

Thu, December 27th, 2012 3:30pm


A thought-provoking poem with a good message... A good person slows down enough on their road in life to take the time to touch another's heart... I'm sorry that I've taken so long to come back to your page & see your works... I encourage you to get someone who is a native English speaker to read with you the works you are working on, & you can tell them what you're doing, & they can help you to word them in a way that would be more easily understood by the masses, then you'd get more comments, & "Likes" than my own & that of a few others who do support you... Please know that I give these suggestions as help to you because I care...

Third line, second word... Frustated (Frustrated= To cause to delay or stop the progress of another, or cause another to become irritated, or angry.)

Fourth line... Thurst (Thirst= To be thirsty, to desire a drink, as water to quench ones thirst.)

Tue, March 11th, 2014 9:23am

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