This story : The jealous twin is about two sisters Jasmine and rose and their best friend Lilly ......

"Friendship is born at the moment when one person says to another:
what! you too ? i thought i was the only one ". 
-C.S Lewis .

It was  winter  breez i was looking up at my old pictures with friends and having my favorite flavored coffee Frappaciono .... We  lived in the State of illinois . I Rose Adderson was born in Mexico , my mom is mexican and my dad was an American , i also have a twin Jasmine Adderson . We all lived happily together unless my father died on October 22 1994 i still remeber that day the day i was very happy but at the end it turned out to be the worst day of my life ! * Crys* . I was very upset but my sister Jasmine she never cared . After my Father's death we moved to Chicago . We bought our home in downtown wihich was pretty fun . After few years from the death of my father we all were that busy we didn't had a single moment to remember him or talk about him . 
Huh ! My friends i still miss them i was 14 when we moved i had no siblings except Jasmine though i had a best friend Lilly in Mexico i still talk to her sometimes but never meet in these five years . Its been 5 years since my father died i loved drawing and painting and jasmine she always tried to be the Beauty Queen .  It was  3:00 am  in the morning and my phone rings . " TA TA TA" my ring tone , its Lilly ... I smiled . 
Lilly is most amazing person in my life this is how i recalled all the moments which took place in mexico :) 

When i was 11 i changed my school . I made trillions of friends but the friend who clicked my heart was Lilly Lilly Johnson . We used to have the coolest group , Swag , holding lollipops etc . Jamine was never in our group no one even wanted to hang around with her. To bad for her .
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Submitted: October 06, 2012

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I hope you all like the chapter 1

Sat, October 6th, 2012 9:28pm


Its a good book. If i was to say something- and i am- its that the book itself was great and the idea behind it but the writing itself wasn't as structred as it could have been. I will continue to read this series though cause it is a good book ;)

Sat, October 6th, 2012 11:14pm


Thankyou carramclaren . Since i'm new and only 13 years old i dont have such experience please help me in the structure if you can .
Thankyou :)

Sun, October 7th, 2012 4:34am

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