You don't understand!

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I was upset with my boyfriend and I just had all this to say to him but I had to try and think of a way to tell him, so I came up with this...

You’re always on my mind but I don’t think you quite see that,

You’re always talking to other girls but not your own girlfriend,

You go off with friends while I just stay back,

Should I just let you do this or should it come to an end?

I love you but why can’t you see?

That I just want it to be just you and me?

You tell me there’s these girls that fancy you,

So at the moment I feel like the dirt on your shoe.

You don’t realise how it makes me feel,

It just doesn’t seem that it’s real,

At first I thought that you were the one,

But now I’m just not so sure,

It just seems like you wanted some fun,

It saddens me right to the core.

I just hope from this that you can see,

How much you really mean to me,

And I hope you can love me back,

So in my heart I can feel the crack.

Submitted: June 28, 2011

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RLH

aww. Damn girl he sounds like such an ass. I mean you're being all brave putting this up on here and he is just....well...UGH!
I really hope this gets fixed for you but if it doesn't then just dump his sorry ass :)

Tue, June 28th, 2011 9:17pm

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Aha aww well thank you for your comment.. he will sort things out otherwise I am leaving him because i've just had enough! My friends all think I should too :)

Wed, June 29th, 2011 9:34am

Thomas Mind

Great work!

I am kind of surprised there is not more likes, and I hope you gave this to the person to whom it was intended.

Straight forward with intent. What is important from what I see that a reader should note is that this was obviously written for someone that would not understand ambiguity. With this in mind it is beautifully done because within that you conveyed your expression with a lesson we should all witness.

Fantastic!
Thomas

Thu, June 30th, 2011 3:50pm

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Thank you again :) but no I never gave it to them, they broke up with me before I had a chance. I didn't really intend to write it like that, I just listened to my heart and wrote what I heard. :)

Thu, June 30th, 2011 10:32am

arun

Don't worry. He's the loser dear. Trust me. To miss, break up with such an awesome person like you, he's the loser. He's geek. Don't worry...

That's a beautiful poem... I like it. Kmu...

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 4:32pm

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Thank you :) that's so sweet xx

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 10:33am

Shazza

truely beautiful, words alone cann not describe how this poem made me feel, you are talented!!?

Mon, July 4th, 2011 10:14am

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Well thank you, it has a good affect then :) and I wouldn't quite say talented, I just put the right words in the right order ?

Mon, July 4th, 2011 9:09am

whiteroses

This is really nicee..
He doesnt deserve you... trust me...
If you want to talk I am here for you... stop by my page!! xoxoxo

Mon, July 4th, 2011 4:04pm

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Aw thank you, that's so sweet and yeah i'll have a look at the things you've written!! :) xxx

Mon, July 4th, 2011 9:11am

BooksRule

You're such a great poet! I can see how often your boyfriend's on your mind from how much you write about him. But then, my poems tend to be about one person, as do most I suppose ...

Ok, sorry for rambling ^^ Sad poem, but lovely :D

Thu, July 7th, 2011 7:47pm

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Yeah he is constantly on my mind :) sometimes for good reasons and sometimes for bad reasons, I have more poems but I didn't think everyone would want to read loads of poems about him...and yeah it's better to base poems on things in your life, it gives it more meaning :) and thank you xx

Thu, July 7th, 2011 1:11pm