Breakaway

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's about leaving everything and taking a chance to make a difference.

Breakaway

 

I want to breakaway

i'll do what it takes

I'll spread my wings

I'll take a chance

I'll make a changed

I'll do what it takes

to breakaway!!

 


Submitted: January 03, 2008

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xxemoxbfsxx

sarah you can't copy song lyrics either. well you need to go 4 sumthin meaningful.
peace out.___ur bff____

Thu, January 3rd, 2008 1:15am

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one, i didn't copy it wouldn't except the Break away title so i put it that way. anyways people liked it

Wed, January 2nd, 2008 6:06pm

Trainman238

yeah like xxemoxbfsxx said, you shouldnt copy song lyrics... but thats okay... still reads very well...
still like it...
P E A C E

B E N

Fri, January 4th, 2008 2:10am

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thxs, i know, i didn't mean to. anyways i don't get what you when you say p e a c e b e n. Don't call me stupid though lol.

Thu, January 3rd, 2008 6:25pm

Trainman238

okay, so you didnt copy the song lyrics. sorry... forgot to read your response to him up there...
SORRY!!! :)

B E N

ps: it really is pretty good...

Fri, January 4th, 2008 2:12am

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ok?

Thu, January 3rd, 2008 6:26pm

Itsuwari

Pretty good, I like that you can inspire and invoke so much feeling in so little words. Keep writing.

Sat, January 5th, 2008 2:54am

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thxs, like i said i love the comments u give. I like your writings especially Come to Me it's so informitive

Fri, January 4th, 2008 7:28pm

Pratibha

YES AND GOD HELPS THOSE WHO HELP THEMSELVES....U SURE ARE A SWEET SOUL...GOD BLESS YOU ....

Sun, July 6th, 2008 2:27am

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God bless u to. thank u for reading.

Sat, July 5th, 2008 7:41pm

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