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yeah like xxemoxbfsxx said, you shouldnt copy song lyrics... but thats okay... still reads very well...
still like it...
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okay, so you didnt copy the song lyrics. sorry... forgot to read your response to him up there...
SORRY!!! :)
B E N
ps: it really is pretty good...
Pretty good, I like that you can inspire and invoke so much feeling in so little words. Keep writing.
Sat, January 5th, 2008 2:54amYES AND GOD HELPS THOSE WHO HELP THEMSELVES....U SURE ARE A SWEET SOUL...GOD BLESS YOU ....
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xxemoxbfsxx
sarah you can't copy song lyrics either. well you need to go 4 sumthin meaningful.
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one, i didn't copy it wouldn't except the Break away title so i put it that way. anyways people liked it
Wed, January 2nd, 2008 6:06pm