When I sleep
Can you see my dreams?
When I lie awake
Do you feel my pain
I love you
DO you love me
I see you
Can you see me
When we lie together
I can feel your heart beat
Do you sleep
Or lie awake with pain
I cannot feel you now
Not when we lie so close
Yet so far away
But when I sleep
I feel your dreams
For they are what engulf me
They are what smother me
And coddle me
Suffocating me
And loving me
You must feel these dreams
Are they not your own?
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I love it...It is like You are talking about Itsuwari and yourself...Iloveit!
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Sasha is talking about Yuri-san and herself. It is a little complicated you know.
Are not these dreams our nightmares? Can they not love, but kill us still as easy? I love this piece Sasha, and the answer to the question unasked is, no.
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That repose of the dream world - nice
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About Yuri-kun? If I didn't know better I'd be jealous, actually, I'd be mad, but it doesnt matter. It seems this site is not L33T compatible, you should find a site that is, or stop using it. Sorry.
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I think Itsu's a bit out of your league, and general age zone. At any rate, It's been a while, a like your writing. You can deffinately feel a bit of the one for who this is inspired in this piece. Are you going out with Megan now!?! I'm so confused!
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This is about Yuri-san, and Sasha knows he is a bit "too old" for her, but it's not really a love poem or anything. And yes She's going out with Megan. For the time-being at least. Thanks for the comment, it's nice to hear from you again, Sasha misses your misconstrued interpretations of "The Philosophies of the Symphony of Blood." ;3
ooo-ooo-ooo. that is sooo good. OMG. fantabulous. great job. take care.
Lydia_xxxx
PS sorry for all the excitement of my comment. i get overwhelmed very easily, especially when i really like something.
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Wow, I'm flattered ^^
Thank you so much!
Absolutely captivating... this one is my favorite!!! ^-^ I can't wait to read more of your poetry.
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I wish i could write more, I've been kinda blocked lately. Thnx ^^
I like this. Very caring and sensitive but full of heartache and loneliness
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Yeah, I like heartache and loneliness too xP
Just kidding, i know what you mean.
Thank you very much for the comments.
telepathy, oh does it exist? The ability to know what someone you love dreamt last night. I know yopu weretspeaking metephoricly, but still, it just makes me wonder. beautifully written. Rock on.
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As the line between reality and the surreal is thin, so is the line between metaphor and literal.
Intrusting. now I can see where my co Altered Personality State, "Dun" went bonkers, and why I'm Bi-polar. Together we totally make a Schizo-Afactive. I don't know about "Puppet" and "Duncan" though. Thanks for sharing that powerful thought. =]
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I have a schizophrenic friend! He has a site on here, his name is Itsuwari.
He almost makes it sound fun, I would hate to be Bi-Polar though... Shiny objects make me horny!
Okay, done being crazy now.
That was one of the most warmest, lovely writings yet. I love the verse: Do you sleep, or lie awake with pain! Lovely, I seriously love this! Very different from what I've read from you and it invites me into your wonderful, crazy, mind that seems to write very well!
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. =^.^=
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