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Itsuwari says; "What you read needn't rhyme, or even make sense, for what isn't read-but infered, is far more real."

When I sleep

Can you see my dreams?

When I lie awake

Do you feel my pain

I love you

DO you love me

I see you

Can you see me

When we lie together

I can feel your heart beat

Do you sleep

Or lie awake with pain

I cannot feel you now

Not when we lie so close

Yet so far away

But when I sleep

I feel your dreams

For they are what engulf me

They are what smother me

And coddle me

Suffocating me

And loving me

You must feel these dreams

Are they not your own?


Submitted: March 14, 2008

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Silver Main

I love it...It is like You are talking about Itsuwari and yourself...Iloveit!

Fri, March 14th, 2008 3:11am

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Sasha is talking about Yuri-san and herself. It is a little complicated you know.

Thu, March 13th, 2008 8:19pm

Itsuwari

Are not these dreams our nightmares? Can they not love, but kill us still as easy? I love this piece Sasha, and the answer to the question unasked is, no.

Fri, March 14th, 2008 4:22am

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Sasha I5 QU173 G14D 7O |-|34R 7|-|47, Yuri-san.

Fri, March 14th, 2008 6:17pm

poewhit

That repose of the dream world - nice

Fri, March 14th, 2008 9:27am

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? C0(\)FU22L3D |\/|UC|-| ?

Fri, March 14th, 2008 6:20pm

InTheStillOfTheNight

I think Itsu's a bit out of your league, and general age zone. At any rate, It's been a while, a like your writing. You can deffinately feel a bit of the one for who this is inspired in this piece. Are you going out with Megan now!?! I'm so confused!

Sat, April 12th, 2008 6:32pm

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This is about Yuri-san, and Sasha knows he is a bit "too old" for her, but it's not really a love poem or anything. And yes She's going out with Megan. For the time-being at least. Thanks for the comment, it's nice to hear from you again, Sasha misses your misconstrued interpretations of "The Philosophies of the Symphony of Blood." ;3

Sat, April 12th, 2008 11:39am

xxemoxbfsxx

ooo-ooo-ooo. that is sooo good. OMG. fantabulous. great job. take care.

Lydia_xxxx

PS sorry for all the excitement of my comment. i get overwhelmed very easily, especially when i really like something.

Sun, June 15th, 2008 7:41pm

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Wow, I'm flattered ^^
Thank you so much!

Mon, June 23rd, 2008 9:58pm

Ichi Clairvoyance

Absolutely captivating... this one is my favorite!!! ^-^ I can't wait to read more of your poetry.

Tue, June 24th, 2008 10:29pm

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I wish i could write more, I've been kinda blocked lately. Thnx ^^

Tue, June 24th, 2008 3:36pm

guff01

I like this. Very caring and sensitive but full of heartache and loneliness

Sun, January 11th, 2009 4:40am

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Yeah, I like heartache and loneliness too xP
Just kidding, i know what you mean.
Thank you very much for the comments.

Sat, January 10th, 2009 9:05pm

DLCannon

telepathy, oh does it exist? The ability to know what someone you love dreamt last night. I know yopu weretspeaking metephoricly, but still, it just makes me wonder. beautifully written. Rock on.

Sat, January 17th, 2009 6:47pm

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As the line between reality and the surreal is thin, so is the line between metaphor and literal.

Sat, January 17th, 2009 4:07pm

DLCannon

Intrusting. now I can see where my co Altered Personality State, "Dun" went bonkers, and why I'm Bi-polar. Together we totally make a Schizo-Afactive. I don't know about "Puppet" and "Duncan" though. Thanks for sharing that powerful thought. =]

Tue, May 19th, 2009 4:35am

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I have a schizophrenic friend! He has a site on here, his name is Itsuwari.
He almost makes it sound fun, I would hate to be Bi-Polar though... Shiny objects make me horny!
Okay, done being crazy now.

Wed, May 20th, 2009 11:41am

hhhh

That was one of the most warmest, lovely writings yet. I love the verse: Do you sleep, or lie awake with pain! Lovely, I seriously love this! Very different from what I've read from you and it invites me into your wonderful, crazy, mind that seems to write very well!

Sun, August 30th, 2009 11:39pm

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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. =^.^=

Sun, August 30th, 2009 4:50pm

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