When I sleep
Can you see my dreams?
When I lie awake
Do you feel my pain
I love you
DO you love me
I see you
Can you see me
When we lie together
I can feel your heart beat
Do you sleep
Or lie awake with pain
I cannot feel you now
Not when we lie so close
Yet so far away
But when I sleep
I feel your dreams
For they are what engulf me
They are what smother me
And coddle me
Suffocating me
And loving me
You must feel these dreams
Are they not your own?
Submitted: March 14, 2008
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Are not these dreams our nightmares? Can they not love, but kill us still as easy? I love this piece Sasha, and the answer to the question unasked is, no.
Fri, March 14th, 2008 4:22am
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Sasha I5 QU173 G14D 7O |-|34R 7|-|47, Yuri-san.
Fri, March 14th, 2008 6:17pm
That repose of the dream world - nice
Fri, March 14th, 2008 9:27am
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? C0(\)FU22L3D |\/|UC|-| ?
Fri, March 14th, 2008 6:20pm
I think Itsu's a bit out of your league, and general age zone. At any rate, It's been a while, a like your writing. You can deffinately feel a bit of the one for who this is inspired in this piece. Are you going out with Megan now!?! I'm so confused!
Sat, April 12th, 2008 6:32pm
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This is about Yuri-san, and Sasha knows he is a bit "too old" for her, but it's not really a love poem or anything. And yes She's going out with Megan. For the time-being at least. Thanks for the comment, it's nice to hear from you again, Sasha misses your misconstrued interpretations of "The Philosophies of the Symphony of Blood." ;3
Sat, April 12th, 2008 11:39am
ooo-ooo-ooo. that is sooo good. OMG. fantabulous. great job. take care.
Lydia_xxxx
PS sorry for all the excitement of my comment. i get overwhelmed very easily, especially when i really like something.
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Wow, I'm flattered ^^
Thank you so much!
Absolutely captivating... this one is my favorite!!! ^-^ I can't wait to read more of your poetry.
Tue, June 24th, 2008 10:29pm
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I wish i could write more, I've been kinda blocked lately. Thnx ^^
Tue, June 24th, 2008 3:36pm
I like this. Very caring and sensitive but full of heartache and loneliness
Sun, January 11th, 2009 4:40am
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Yeah, I like heartache and loneliness too xP
Just kidding, i know what you mean.
Thank you very much for the comments.
telepathy, oh does it exist? The ability to know what someone you love dreamt last night. I know yopu weretspeaking metephoricly, but still, it just makes me wonder. beautifully written. Rock on.
Sat, January 17th, 2009 6:47pm
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As the line between reality and the surreal is thin, so is the line between metaphor and literal.
Sat, January 17th, 2009 4:07pm
Intrusting. now I can see where my co Altered Personality State, "Dun" went bonkers, and why I'm Bi-polar. Together we totally make a Schizo-Afactive. I don't know about "Puppet" and "Duncan" though. Thanks for sharing that powerful thought. =]
Tue, May 19th, 2009 4:35am
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I have a schizophrenic friend! He has a site on here, his name is Itsuwari.
He almost makes it sound fun, I would hate to be Bi-Polar though... Shiny objects make me horny!
Okay, done being crazy now.
That was one of the most warmest, lovely writings yet. I love the verse: Do you sleep, or lie awake with pain! Lovely, I seriously love this! Very different from what I've read from you and it invites me into your wonderful, crazy, mind that seems to write very well!
Sun, August 30th, 2009 11:39pm
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. =^.^=
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I love it...It is like You are talking about Itsuwari and yourself...Iloveit!
Fri, March 14th, 2008 3:11amAuthor
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Sasha is talking about Yuri-san and herself. It is a little complicated you know.
Thu, March 13th, 2008 8:19pm