What silence spoken
Never heard
Whith blind eyes
We know no world
Without love
Is there life?
Without joy
Is there strife
I love you
Do you love me
With what is left
Can you see
As I see
This damned world
Burning
Scourning
Yet rarely mourning
What hope can there be
If you cannot love me.
Submitted: March 15, 2008
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your transistions are so good. you leave so many questions. you must be in a crisis relationship. any1 from booksie? (sorry, i'm nosy) take care.
Lydia_xxxx
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Kind of *looks down* Do you know Itsuwari?
Mon, June 23rd, 2008 10:03pm
Wow... I can definitely relate to this one. I likes it! ^-^
Tue, June 24th, 2008 10:27pm
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Thanks :P
Tue, June 24th, 2008 3:33pm
yes, i know him. omg, are you serious. oooooooooo. okay, I got a little overwhelmed. calmed down now. wow.
L ?
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You do, isn't he such an awesome poet!?! Oh kewl, thanks again for the comment.
Mon, June 30th, 2008 6:23pm
Very lovely, whoever this is for sure feel proud and great about themselves. Once again it was warm and filled with heart and mind, great job!
Sun, August 30th, 2009 11:40pm
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Again, thank you so much! You're far too kind.
Sun, August 30th, 2009 4:50pmFacebook Comments
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Raya
Wow nice love poem.The poem is very beautiful.I am new on booksie. I would be honor if you would read my poemsand leave a comment.I hope we could become friends.
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Sorry it took so long to get back, I haven't been on at all lately. Thank you for the comment.
Mon, June 23rd, 2008 9:57pm