Just a weird thought I had, this is what happens when i'm not horny. >.

Your eyes as black as coal
Skin pale as the moon
You stand above her dying corpse
Blade stained with her blood
Oh lovers, oh lovers
Why must you fight
Why must you kill
Your hands trembling
Your mind racing
Your knees weekening
Lust fills your loins
Your eyes as black as coal
Your skin pale as moon
You lay atop her motionless corpse
And feel her love one last time.


Submitted: January 22, 2009

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guff01

nice shocking ending. you threw that hook

Sun, January 25th, 2009 4:28am

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Hooks hurt. Once Megan tried to take me fishing and when I tries to cast it the hook grabbed onto my ear ='(
Er.... uh... I mean, thank you for the comment =^.^=

Sun, January 25th, 2009 12:36pm

yuu shindemura

hmmm... quite necromaniac but it's cool! i like it! XD

Tue, January 27th, 2009 1:13am

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I think you mean necrophiliac, or maybe you mean necromaniac, not sure if that's even a word, but thanks =^.^=

Tue, January 27th, 2009 6:12am

Adeisa

I love the way you worded this.

Wed, January 28th, 2009 3:17am

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I hate this one, it always gives me a really bad feeling in my gut, I think it reminds me of when i was raped >.<
Thanks for the coment though. =^.^=

Tue, January 27th, 2009 10:13pm

yuu shindemura

anyone who has a pasion for corpses,i think that's necromaniac...or well, that's what i mean. he he. ^.^

Wed, January 28th, 2009 5:18pm

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Oh, that makes sense. I've just never heard those two words used together, necro and mania, but you're right, that makes sense.

Wed, January 28th, 2009 8:12pm

Jessica George

This one I liked =^,^= well put together..nice job!

Wed, April 22nd, 2009 3:16am

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Thankies! =^.^=

Fri, April 24th, 2009 6:40am

hhhh

That was nice! Interesting, obsession with a dead body, put perfectly and you are seriously a great writer! I can't wait to read some more from you!

Sun, August 30th, 2009 11:52pm

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I can't read this poem. I wrote it but I can;t even read it it makes me feel sick T.T
Thank you for all your feedback, I simply don't have the words to express my gratitude towards you. Thank you so much!

Sun, August 30th, 2009 4:58pm

ISkipDownHallways247

wow I'm surprised I like this poem so much! i really like the end- good job! I'll have to read more from you (:

Thu, March 25th, 2010 10:39pm

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Thank you sooo much!
It's been so long since I was even on this site because people stopped reading my work, haha. Thanks for the comment, I really apreciate it.

Thu, March 25th, 2010 10:39pm

DLCannon Reprise

hey, we have something in common! Hate to say, but this turned me on!

Mon, January 28th, 2013 6:27am

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