Black and white world

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I felt like this was all true.

This world has been sabotaged. 

And I'm not the only one to see.

The murders that have been committed by the insane.

Do they kill to have them selfs recognized or to feel alive.

But all have been driven by the one thing that most desired, revenge.

They are all wroms to me, they can wither in the dirt.

But all in time will disaprear.

All are loved ones that have died or have been hurt, can open there eyes and there not the only ones.

And because of the pain and murders and suicides that are done every day.

This world will remained black and white.


Submitted: April 16, 2008

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tin2twinkling

i kinda get what you mean but i sure hope this world turns into more shades of gray everyday and eventually be a wonderful scope of vibrant colours. magnificent poem!!!

Wed, April 16th, 2008 5:30am

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thanks

Thu, April 17th, 2008 8:56pm

Darkness is my Light

Yup I see what your saying..

Thu, April 17th, 2008 3:16am

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Thanks I felt like it was true.

Thu, April 17th, 2008 8:57pm

seesawmae

this is good, i see what you're saying!

Fri, April 18th, 2008 3:08am

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thanks

Thu, April 17th, 2008 8:57pm

Catherine

this is so true. awesome job:)

Fri, August 8th, 2008 4:12am

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thanks

Thu, August 7th, 2008 10:06pm

MiyaviManson

Several spelling errors, but the message is very true overall. I definetly loved it.

Good job on this one :]

Tue, August 19th, 2008 7:15pm

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thanks. I know I can't spell.

Tue, August 19th, 2008 12:29pm

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