Its Storming And The Wave Is High

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Its about the hope which every human being have somewhere in their heart even in tough situations. The hope which makes life going and wide open our eyes to take risks.

'It's storming and the wave is high'

by Saumya Verma

 

Once I concluded I was shy

Opportunities move away from nearby

Funny thoughts came to my mind

All other failures rewind

But as fast as I could step out

I bleed.. & left the crap out

Someone said to me

You know its storming, see

When I saw you storm, you delighted me

When I faced you.. You frightened me

The waves of the ocean enclosed me within

There was no escape .. in my heart I was sinking

Even though i decide..

If its storming and the wave is high

I will live life fully and will not defy\"smiley\"


Submitted: July 01, 2012

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Chris Gerard

I must say, it's well written! Haha, only kidding. Not that it ISN'T well written - it is - just that I have more to say. It is also thought-provoking and intriguing. Well done Saumy.

Mon, July 2nd, 2012 1:24pm

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Thanks:)
I'll try to improve it...

Tue, July 3rd, 2012 10:34pm

dadio

Fine poem & theme.

Mon, July 2nd, 2012 6:15pm

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Thanks:)

Tue, July 3rd, 2012 10:30pm

Awaneesh Shukla

it flows well, and rhymes too, cheers!! :) i agree with chris, your poem is truly intriguing . keep up the good work . :)

Mon, August 20th, 2012 12:17pm

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