'It's storming and the wave is high'
by Saumya Verma
Once I concluded I was shy
Opportunities move away from nearby
Funny thoughts came to my mind
All other failures rewind
But as fast as I could step out
I bleed.. & left the crap out
Someone said to me
You know its storming, see
When I saw you storm, you delighted me
When I faced you.. You frightened me
The waves of the ocean enclosed me within
There was no escape .. in my heart I was sinking
Even though i decide..
If its storming and the wave is high
I will live life fully and will not defy
Submitted: July 01, 2012
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Fine poem & theme.
Mon, July 2nd, 2012 6:15pm
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Thanks:)
Tue, July 3rd, 2012 10:30pm
it flows well, and rhymes too, cheers!! :) i agree with chris, your poem is truly intriguing . keep up the good work . :)
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Chris Gerard
I must say, it's well written! Haha, only kidding. Not that it ISN'T well written - it is - just that I have more to say. It is also thought-provoking and intriguing. Well done Saumy.
Mon, July 2nd, 2012 1:24pmAuthor
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Thanks:)
Tue, July 3rd, 2012 10:34pmI'll try to improve it...