Worth It

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

My first poem. :]
**This is NOT a synopsis of my life. This is simply a compiled, random thought.**

As I sit here by the phone,

waiting for you to call,

I begin to doubt myself.

Are you worth it at all?

~

You said

after the fight,

“Let’s wait until the time is right.”

~

When will that be?

So many others have made you happy,

As far as I can see

~

I’ve been ready.

Ready for you

You never acknowledge,

No matter what I do

~

You’ve given me nothing but despair,

Hopelessness and pain.

I want to be with you again,

But will I have anything to gain?

~

Are you worth the sacrifice?

Or am I just being cynical?

Will paranoia suffice?

Or should I be critical?

~

I thought you loved me

But it’s all done.

While you try to put me on hold,

I just say,

“It’s been fun.”

~

As I hang up,

I knew it wouldn’t fit

I should have realized

You just weren’t worth it.


Submitted: December 27, 2009

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La nina de azul

It's A delightful poem you truly have talent hope you write more poetry

Sun, December 27th, 2009 5:44am

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Thanks! =) I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I probably will in the near future. ;)

Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:58pm

Lizo

Wow!! That was great! Rhyme, flow, emotion, everything was perfectly put together into a great work of poetry!
*buys hat*
*puts it on*
*takes it off*
hat's off to you! :D

Sun, December 27th, 2009 8:32pm

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Hehe, thanks, Lizo! That means a lot especially coming from a great writer like you. ;)

Sun, December 27th, 2009 3:44pm

McKenzie Sprags

WOW!! I really liked this poem!! Are you sure it's your first? You seem a bit experienced. =]

Mon, December 28th, 2009 12:52am

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Lol, yes it is. I just have some great writers as friends from which I kinda got a few ideas on HOW to write an adequate poem. I'm glad you liked it. =)

Sun, December 27th, 2009 7:50pm

killertabby

Whoa awesome! Great poem

Tue, December 29th, 2009 3:25am

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Tyvm. =)

Mon, December 28th, 2009 7:28pm

Kairi

:) What an amazing piece of work my fellow crab friend!
Please write more, because you're very good at writing mellow, emotional, smooth poems... and probably everything else for that matter. Bravo!

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 12:48am

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Tyvm. ^^ I have one other poem up at this moment, in case you haven't read that one yet.

Fri, January 1st, 2010 5:36pm

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