Anger and Jealousy

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem

Anger and Jealousy

Anger and Jealousy hurt the heart Need to get over the pain I don't know where to start It's hard when I see others that have what I need Some might think I'm spoiled or that it's just greed Sleeping life away trying to put it all together Feeling dizzy heartbroken and under the weather Dealing with emotional stress and not knowing why Breaks my heart and makes me want to cry


Submitted: April 01, 2009

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Elliott

this is good
i like the formation
good descriptions
great work
feel free to check outm y stuff.

Wed, April 1st, 2009 7:16pm

Helena Parris

I like it. You wrote the beginning and middle of a verse and in a way that makes the reader stick the end on, and then the reader gets to go back and check and say, yeah, that is how the verse ends.

Wed, April 1st, 2009 7:43pm

Flash

Different way to write a poem. I like different. Well wrote piece. Flows and has a good subject. Very nicely done!

Wed, April 1st, 2009 8:53pm

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