A Surrendered Mind.
Poem by: ScarfFreak
(Paragraphs Are Being A Bit Gay, Sorry.)
Realisation comes from the mind, comes from the wise.
And the Catholic schools which blind opinions,
The path to lead is the path of faith.
From the mind lets grab realisation;
And my mind tells me we're going down, without hope of a saviour.
My wise tells me we're going down, without hope.
I'm not one to block belifs,
But can you tell me that you can see redemption for this life?
There's no messianic form watching,
Only a wise mind telling us we're going down, without hope.
I'm not a preacher, a prophet, but a soul.
I'm not a pretender, a fake, but a soul.
We are taught, the bible is the truth,
But when agony faces us, where is the man they write about?
And my mind tells me we're going down, without hope of a saviour.
My wise tells me we're going down, without hope.
I'm not one to block belifs,
But can you tell me that you can see redemption for this life?
There's no messianic form watching,
Only a wise mind telling us we're going down, without hope.
I remeber shaking the hands of faith,
I be not a child, and the comfort I felt at that point has gone.
I be not a seed, but a flower with a wise mind.
If there is a man up there.
I'm mistaken. I'm mistaken. I'm mistaken.
If you want s to beleve;
Where's the evidence? Show evidence.
Convince us, so that your evidence shall not be burnt.
And my mind tells me we're going down, without hope of a saviour.
My wise tells me we're going down, without hope.
I'm not one to block belifs,
But can you tell me that you can see redemption for this life?
There's no messianic form watching,
Only a wise mind telling us we're going down, without hope.
I remeber shaking the hands of faith,
I be not a child, and the comfort I felt at that point has gone.
I be not a seed, but a flower with a wise mind.
If there is a man up there.
I'm mistaken. I'm mistaken. I'm mistaken.
I'm not a preacher, a prophet, but a soul.
I'm not a pretender, a fake, but a soul.
But how can you leave us, no hope at all?
© Copyright 2016 ScarfFreak. All rights reserved.
A Surrendered Mind.
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Absolutely amazing
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Why Thank You x
Like this - the repetition of 'I'm not a preacher, a prophet, but a soul' ect... is quite powerful!
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Thank you, I thought so too (: x
:) Very lovely work! It does indeed look like lyrics.
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Thanks ;) x
This is very well written (with a few spelling mistakes but hey LOL) I'm impressed with your writing skills :) but I'm wondering if these are true confessions or...
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Yeah...Usually for spelling I rely on Spell- check but it obviously let me down, Lol. Confessions? Well; it all comes from the heart, and thank you ;) x
You're so good at writing. I've just read your other poems. ^_^ All those and 'Fragments' put together makes my work look like... poop. :P Its true, you are extremely talented. I'm so jealous. *.*
Brilliant, stupendous work! *Applauds*
-Caitlin x
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Oh wow, I doubt I can do much better to yor work, actually, I don;t think there IS a better to your work- you're the talented one here. Thank you though.x :D
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