Silence and us

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

playful colors of love.

remember when we were
chasing rabbits
under the pyramid of sun
you and me
in the wilderness
curved and wretched
we run

we cried
in each others arms
under moon's laughter
under sky's despair
sins were playing
around our castle in the air

hold on to me
i still burn your demons
i still hide your fears
i still demand your kisses
on this stranded field


something crossed the room
blackness taking a ride
no sanity
poet is the only love
climbing upon the tide

lorn dreamer
has been murdered
on the obscene teritory
hidden behind the shade

shouting on stars
on this gruesome parade

your tounge is crawling
in the shadows of my neck
writing amatory lines
avidity of lips
alterating unplaced kingdoms
while it shines
....


Submitted: September 09, 2008

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matmoo

Man this is good. I mean, really nice imagery. You weave it about really well. And the poem does what you said it does, it is 'playful colours of love'. Good stuff.
matmoo :)

Tue, September 9th, 2008 4:20pm

Schmetterling

thanks a lot :)

Tue, September 9th, 2008 4:41pm

Marathongman

poet is the only love
climbing upon the tide - Nice

Fri, September 12th, 2008 12:53am

Schmetterling

he is the love :)
Thanks.

Fri, September 12th, 2008 8:09am

lisalisa

Love it! Wow

Tue, October 7th, 2008 6:42am

Schmetterling

THANKS FOR DROPPING BY LISA :)

Tue, October 7th, 2008 4:30pm

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