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This is a poem about a man who has a hidden feelings for a winsome girl. unfortunately, the girl was already engage to his brother. now, the question is, if you were his friend, after you read this poem, what advice or comment could you give.

think after. feel the essence of this poem and enjoy reading this. hope you'll like it.

Submitted: July 30, 2012

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Submitted: July 30, 2012



" LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT "when they call it.

Well, if that was the case I forbid it.

When i saw her in the aisles.

She really caught my eyes.


My heart had stop to pump,

And starting to deeply cramp.

My tears begin to fall,

But I can't do anything at all.


I admit, I was being mesmirized,

And was being hypnotized.

Just like a man who was paralized.

You'll notice, if you try to realize.


If I will be judge by a critic,

Maybe he would tell that, i'm too hypocrite,

Because of loving someone, who was already taken.

But am I wrong, If she is the reason why I'm breathin'?


I'm her best man and she is my brother's bride.

I gave her to my brother and ate all my pride.

Too much pain kills me,

But to see her smile makes me happy.


 I'm really drawn to her.

The problem is, we can't be together.

She is engaged to my brother,

And she will always be in my dreams forever.

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