love and possesion



Think of the one you love,

think of them as a bubble, 

if you own that bubble, 

even touch it,

it may pop,

its not about possesion,

but respect.



Submitted: September 29, 2013

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quiet dreamer

at first I thought 'so... what the heck?' and then I read 'it may pop, its not about possesion, but respect' and it's so true. and it's such a clever image! very good poem!

Sun, September 29th, 2013 8:21pm


this is a great piece, respect gets you further in life than having possession.

Mon, September 30th, 2013 11:32am


thank you, it is a great thing in life.

Mon, September 30th, 2013 5:36pm

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