My Sour Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote about sweet love now Im going to write about real love. As you can tell this relationship didn't work.

Submitted: January 23, 2012

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My love is not sweet nor is it airy 

to me its more like cancer 

for you it is always hot or cold something you want to bury 

but if I were to leave that would not be the answer  

 

For sometimes if I'm not near you it's  ike a dager to the heart  

and other  times I wish you dead  

but  my love is also a unque piece of art  

that may leave you to sick to even go to bed

 

But at first you made me so happy

you even made me laugh

That is quit a feat you see

But this relationship is sawing my heart in half 

 

I know this will end

and I will break your heart

Then I will leave this love wonder land 

 for you do not  deserve to love a cruel person like I , which I know from the start

 


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