Hold on.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is another of my desgusting horror stories...

Screaming. All you hear is screaming. Then it stops. You tenatively open your eyes. You feel your heart pump out adrenaline as you find his dismembered, writhing torso in front of you. The hot tears run down your cheeks. you struggle to get out of the chains binding you to the pole. you feel the warm bodies of your comerades bound next to you, their struggles to get free. A fresh scream reaches your ears as you look up to see another of your friends held up by a hook through the nape of his neck, blood a flowing river down his back. The hook sways, and then movies on a system of pulleys over a network of saws, blades, and acid vats. The saws begin to whirr and he is dropped over them. You cant bear to look. You close your eyes, but you can still hear his screams of agony, feel his blood splashing on you. You know you'll be next. You scream as the hook pierces your skin. not through the nape of your neck, oh no, but through your stomach. You scream as it lifts you, and it's all over soon...you dont feel the blades slicing through you, you dont feel your bones breaking, you dont feel a thing...

Submitted: October 21, 2006

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Mr Benn

The pace of this piece really leaves you breathless! Great writing

Sat, October 21st, 2006 12:17pm

Sammy Wang Yang

Now this is what you call Horror! Nice writing.

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 7:02pm

Cody Burkhart

I like the vagueness of it. There's no explanation as to why you are being tortured unlike in the movies where it is a long drawn out process allowing time for escape.

Mon, January 7th, 2013 5:32am


Creative! I liked it, I think maybe you should enter some of your books to Tales of CrossWood Lane. We accept all stories! But I choose what I think is best. Your story stood out to me please look at my profile for more information. But Lol your gore is exquisite!

Sat, May 31st, 2014 5:57pm

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