Submitted: November 10, 2010
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I really like this. the last two lines are completely amazing. (but so are the rest of them). good job! :)
Wed, November 10th, 2010 6:54pm
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thx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Thu, November 11th, 2010 6:53am
yes, its true in this mad race we often say more goodbyes than hellos, and its the problem with each one of us, with time being the silent killer.
P.S. just like this poem's abt u, mine life:a lust? was abt me ;D
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kewl! thx for the insightful comment! :)
Sun, November 14th, 2010 3:54am
WHO?
i think i understand, but just making sure...
btw, its REALLY good, i loved it.
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thx, and im pretty sure u know who im talking about. :P
Sun, November 14th, 2010 7:50am
That was great:)
It made me think of that song hey, hey, hey Goodbye:)
Keep up the good work!
-Ricki
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thanks SO much! :)
Wed, November 17th, 2010 6:08amFacebook Comments
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I don't get it....but it's GOOD.
Wed, November 10th, 2010 5:59pmWhy are you so good at writing poems?! LOL! :)
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thx, the same reason ur AMAZING at mystery stories!!!! U should post some of them!!
Thu, November 11th, 2010 6:55am