Shadow Killers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Please comment :)
I know it;s really short, but I would love your opinion if I should continue it as a novel.

She let out a screech as black shadows lashed at her caramel skin.

The woman writhed on the floor, clawing at her chest. The small tendrils of darkness forced themselves through her closed pouty red lips. She choked, her jade eyes wide with fear.

Her slender fingers gripped her silken waves of long black hair. Dark liquid flooded from her mouth, running down her flushed cheeks in streams. Her large jade eyes rolled back into her head, now completely white. Her eyelids fluttered and shut. Her body stopped shaking completely.

A second later, her eyes flew open again; her pupils dilated so much so they dwarfed the jade irises. Her lips parted wide to let loose a blood- curdling scream elicited from her throat.

The woman seized again in her pool of blood on the white, tiled floor. Her hands gripped for something, anything, to end her pain… the horrible, gut wrenching pain…

And then the black tendrils exploded from her flesh in a shower of blood and viscera.

She wheezed, unable to let free another scream. Her hands clamped tightly over where the shadows had burst forth from her stomach, trying to staunch the bleeding- as if she could possibly bleed anymore…

Her body went limp in the sticky red liquid, her hand slipping from her wet, slender waist. Her clothes clung to her petite frame. Her chest heaved once, twice and in her last breath she whispered one word, one name…


Submitted: March 15, 2012

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Ice Winifr3d

More! I want to read more! i would definitely suggest that you continue this! :D

Thu, March 15th, 2012 3:58am

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I hope! I'm that writer that gets inspiration and loses it.

Wed, March 14th, 2012 9:54pm

TeenWriter004

This is REally good.. I Look Forward to REading More..
its very detailed.

Thu, March 15th, 2012 6:52pm

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Thank you! But as I'm writing it, I'm losing my details... I gotta work on that!

Thu, March 15th, 2012 1:52pm

Semoyia

You should definitely write more, can't wait to read it

Thu, March 15th, 2012 7:26pm

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I hope I can!

Thu, March 15th, 2012 1:53pm

Jenae

you are very descriptive but at once instance it seems obvious? (...the gut wrenching pain...) I like it though. I feel i can sense her pain as u so wonderfully described it.

Fri, March 16th, 2012 12:15am

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I didn't even notice that! Thanks!

Fri, March 16th, 2012 2:18pm

Breathtaking madness

Wow I really like it. I got into it, then realized it ended and I went from (: to :( lol I want more! (:

Wed, March 21st, 2012 2:13am

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kk ill try my best!

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 12:38am

Insane Membrane

its was short but very graphic well done

Thu, July 12th, 2012 9:00am

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Thank you! I know that it's short but I'm horrible at plot.

Thu, July 12th, 2012 10:50am

J3N

You never posted the continued version you showed me :( You should it was good :)

Sun, July 15th, 2012 1:44am

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Mmm... No. I lost it.

Sun, July 15th, 2012 2:02am

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