A wicked Cinderella story

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Apparently, the old familiar tale is getting boring, so here's a new, more updated version of the classic Cinderella story ;)

Submitted: December 24, 2009

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Submitted: December 24, 2009

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Once upon a time, there was a beautiful girl named Cinderella, her father died when she was young, so she had to live with her evil step mother and her two ugly daughters. They always forced her to do all the house work but luckily she managed to hire a servant that did all the work without anyone noticing.

They treated her badly and blamed her for their mistakes and the horrible things they did, but since she was blackmailing their mother -because she caught her shoplifting once, she didn’t punish Cinderella or react in any way. The three of them often went to parties and left her alone in the house, but she would take the chance and go clubbing with her friends without her stepmother knowing.

One afternoon, a messenger from the palace came with a message to deliver to the house but everyone was sleeping then, and Cinderella had her iPod on loud so she didn’t hear the doorbell. Next morning the two girls received emails from the prince inviting them to his magical party in which he’ll choose his future wife, the girls went crazy jumping up and down screaming, Cinderella checked her hotmail but there wasn’t any messages, they were teasing her constantly because they were going and she wasn’t.

The day finally came and the girls each had costumed designed dresses, they got ready for the party, and then left while Cinderella gave them a sad goodbye and went back inside. Suddenly, out of nowhere appeared a witch wearing white and pink, telling Cinderella that she was here to make her ready to go to the party; she tapped Cinderella’s shoulder with her magical golden stick, and turned her into a very beautiful princess, she had her wear a Valentino dress which was the same as the one Jennifer Lopez wore to the Emmys, she had her hair and makeup done and she finally wore the perfect matching Chanel shoes.

She looked very beautiful, but one thing was missing, the witch said something to the magical stick and there it was: a shiny, black Mercedes in front of her. She reminded Cinderella that she must come home before 3 am or else everything will come back to reality. She got to the party, was the prettiest girl there, but when she saw the prince she discovered that it was all…not worth it. He was short, bald and a smoker, no wonder why he needed a party to choose a wife!

She rushed out of the room quickly before he comes talk to her, she tripped and didn’t notice that she had lost a shoe; she just got in the car and headed home. One of the valets found the shoe later and kept looking for the owner, he knocked every door in town to see who did this shoe belong to until he reached Cinderella’s house- who was already going crazy searching for that shoe. Her step mother opened the door and tried it herself first then her daughters then they called Cinderella to come try it, as soon as she saw the valet they fall in love with each other and as the shoe fitted her perfectly, he knew she was the one. They got married and lived happily ever after (not exactly, they got a divorce a while later).

The End


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