- a little poem about regret :)

Regret
When one door is closed
Another is opened
But how can we know
If the right door was chosen
 
And what of the doors
Those remaining unseen
Leaving us questioning
What could have been?
 
And as we walk through
The doors that we trust
Are those doors we choose
Really meant for us?
 
Because my heart seems to be
In an unfamiliar place
And my dreams I believe
Are too difficult to chase
 
Now as one door is closed
Another is opened
And the doors I’ve been shown
The doors I have chosen
 
Have left me here
With regret in my heart
Sitting silently asking;
Do I deserve a new start?


Submitted: January 25, 2009

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storyofmylife

beautiful again


your writing amazes me.

u need to get it publishedd and in a book

its...perfect.

wow.

Mon, January 26th, 2009 2:03am

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thankyou very much, I am very proud to say that i do think you may be my biggest fan :) an yeh it is a dream of mine to one day be published and hopefully have an impact on someones life with the words i write :) and if it ever does happen it will be because of the encouragement you and others have provided me so thankyou so much for your support :)

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:37am

Daughter of the Moon

Very nice poem. Really loved it. Flowed perfectly just want to read it again and again. Brilliant job.

Mon, January 26th, 2009 3:38am

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Thankyou, it means alot to know that people actually like my work and it makes me want to keep going and going so thankyou, i dont think people understand how much one comment will do for a persons confidence so thankyou again :)

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:34am

Lady Z

Ooo, I like this poem. Yeah unfortunately we all make decisions that end up leaving us in a difficult place in life and within the mind.
Just remember what you learn from your mistakes and move on.

=] Well penned.

Mon, January 26th, 2009 5:09pm

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thankyou :)

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:33am

Midnight Rose

Well Like they say when one door is closed another one is always open! Nicely done!

Mon, January 26th, 2009 8:17pm

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Thankyou :)

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:30am

autodocumentography

this was well written.i liked it.

Tue, January 27th, 2009 10:59am

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thankyou

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:29am

Loving Mallory

I love your poem.I think we all have something in common with it.Once i get my writings posted read,okay?

Tue, January 27th, 2009 10:05pm

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thankyou very much for the comment :) and i will definately read your writings once you have them posted, i look forward to it :)
- Seth

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:49pm

guff01

Just look for that open window when a door shuts. Very original and creative idea. You don't know if that door is right unless you walk through

Wed, January 28th, 2009 5:02am

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You are to right there, to right and thankyou for the comment :)
- Seth

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:48pm

OliviaJane

very well written, i like your style...i find not many people on here write fluently like that. would greatly appreciate your opinion on some of my poems xxOJ

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:07pm

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Thankyou very much for you support, it means alot to know my work is appreciated and i will definately be sure to check out some of your poems :)
thankyou again
- Seth

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:46pm

Angelsong

beautiful written. that last question at the end just makes my heart sink. :( [in a good way xD] great job!

Sat, January 31st, 2009 3:20am

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Thankyou very much for your continued support :)

Sat, January 31st, 2009 4:26am

EmoScene

It's very good! =] I read this one over and over again! Love it! Good Job! ?Karen

Sat, January 31st, 2009 9:34pm

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thankyou very much for taking your time to read :) and im glad you enjoyed it :)
- Seth

Sat, January 31st, 2009 3:31pm

LilLoCksea

Wow, I truly did enjoy this poem!
O, the self doubt and confidence that I myself sometimes lack.
I love the rhythem and rhyme of the poem, it is well written and relateable.
Well done.

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