That Moment

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

sadness, grief, and death!

If I knew that moment,
Was to be our last.

I would have done things
Differently, in our past.

At the first light of day,
I would have held you in my arms.

A while longer,
And been content to stay.

I would have told you more often,
How much you really mean to me.

And, that because of you,
My heart was finally set free.

But, I took it for granted,
That I would always, have you near me.

And now, thinking that you did,
Not knowing how strong my love,

For you was,
Is my greatest fear.

To the Heavens I pray,
that you are watching me, from above.

And that, you can feel
All of my Love.

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Submitted: January 05, 2007

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Saturday Night

I could feel the sadness in each line. Very well written to someone who I'm sure is watching over you.
Nice job seven.

Saturday Night

Fri, January 5th, 2007 4:27am


I know the feeling, of losing someone.

Thu, January 4th, 2007 10:39pm


Not knowing the depth. Many ships go on the rocks because od DEPTH.

Fri, January 5th, 2007 9:35am


thanks so much!

Sat, January 6th, 2007 11:23am

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