The longest night

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Another incomplete old one i found, completed with the feelings of today... It's got a structure which is a lil confusing, but that's the way i like it...

It’s long past late and I’m still awake

But, maybe we’re staring at the same stars tonight

 

Lying here without you I find so hard to take

And, maybe we’re both feeling the same inside

 

Tonight is the longest night of my time

I struggle, to keep the tears from my eyes

 

The memories of you softly invade my mind

To hold you now, I would give up my life

 

I don’t really know, what is wrong or right

I can never tell what is true

 

I never know, what to do in this fight

But I know that I still love you


Submitted: April 17, 2007

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ThePseudoMe

Really like this. The confusion of Love. What to do? What is right? Does anybody truly know the answer? To me, everybodies answer is a little different. Love is the final exam in life, you either pass with flying colours, or fail. Well Done!

Tue, April 17th, 2007 9:02pm

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Thanks, I guess my answer to what love is, is holding on and letting go. Holding on to someone, and letting go of all your fears...

Tue, April 17th, 2007 2:12pm

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