Beautiful Cheater 2
I do things for her...
That most would not do for her...
I say I do things for her..
To the point my feelings grow for her
I want her to be mine
Never really crossed my mind
That she be quiet most if not all the time
My girl, no, I treat her as if she was
I'm thinking she already mine just because
Movies, dinner dates, everything else in between
We both were having too much fun
Were young and thats how its suppose to be
What were sparks that lit the flame
The best feeling in the world
Besides good sex after we both have came
Laying eye level, I wonder where this could lead
What she had to say next, I could not believe..
Girl: Wait, there is something I have to tell you. I think it is about time I tell you the truth.. Your not the only one i have been seeing. In fact there has been someone before and even during us..
Boy: Wait, what?? So, for the past couple of months I have been wasting my time? You been using me the whole time?!
Girl: I was going to tell you, damn! I really was, but I did not mean for us to go this far. I swear I was going to tell you, but you made it really uncomfortable for me to do so!
Boy: How?! Go ahead tell me how I made it uncomfortable.! You sitting here telling me, I been messing with another man's woman behind his back and he does not know?!
As tears start to build
Anger the only thing I feel
As I stare at the fear in her lips
Theres the thought of me kissing another man's...
Girl: I'm sorry, I did not want it to go this far. I really didn't think you would believe me.
As I stare at the fear in her lips
I can only think about kissing another man's...
Girl:..... I love the both of you! I want the both of you.
As I stare at the fear in her lips
I can only think about kissing another man's...
Boy: I never settle for being someone's other when I know I can be someone's only... know what, forget it. I don't need this, I don't deserve it honestly. I guess it is true what they say, relationships does not die a natural death. It is murdered by attitude, behavior, ego, or ignorance. And it was definitely behavior and ignorance on your part.
Submitted: May 08, 2015
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Ah I like it, yes I agree, would be a little more poetic given a slight rhyme scheme. Nevertheless, good job!
Sun, May 10th, 2015 6:02pmWoah....the salt :O. I'm happy she told him though, because she could have been one of those trifling girls that keep it their secret, so I applaud her for doing that, but she's an ass for even allowing herself to have to tell such a truth. I really liked this free verse poem, and I feel bad for the guy. "When I could be someone's only" I loved that line! Great poem! ~Poetic
Tue, May 12th, 2015 3:45pmNice writing, the use of dialogue within the poem works for me.
Fri, May 15th, 2015 11:36amI read two before one...i don't know why. That was deep and very true to life. Let me checkout one.
Wed, May 20th, 2015 9:55pmgetting mature by each work of urs... enjoyed reading.. good work..
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hitesh kar
nice message but u gotta try and make it rhyme...good job tho
Sun, May 10th, 2015 5:25amAuthor
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Thanks! I usually make all my poetry rhyme, but wanted to try something different here with this one
Sun, May 10th, 2015 6:48pm