Poem by: SGBanks
Submitted: February 06, 2012
A quiet open blue sky
Then a flock of birds swarm in
In their migration south
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Okay; I've never gotten Haiku's, it is set like this;
5 - 7 - 5? You know, words?
Yeah; I think that's it.
Well, I think I shall try one some day, see what I can get out of it. But for me reading this Haiku, I think it was fun. But possibly, just possibly, you could maybe come up with another Haiku for going south?x
(Not saying that this one was bad, just there is a lot of things in the South;P!)
haha true and I see what your saying... I will try
I think that the idea is very good :) simple... I liked it :)
It's not about how many words. It's actually based on the syllables. Five syllables, seven syllables, and then ending with five syllables. Usually these poems are based on nature. You did wonderfully, but I think you went a syllable over on that last line. ;)
Your right it was six syllables haha so much for it being a haiku
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