They see and judge what comes to the naked eye
What they judge i dont care
If it is good I will continue to shine
If it is bad I will continue to do me
For I was not put on Earth to please you
But to live by His comand and be Me
Submitted: February 04, 2012
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Awe some poem. I love the way you let your feelings go. You should check out some of my poems. I truly enjoyed the read!!! :)
Mon, February 6th, 2012 12:36am
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Thanks and will do
Sun, February 5th, 2012 7:16pm
I really really like those last two lines. This poem was really good! Loved it. :)
Mon, February 6th, 2012 8:09pm
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Thanks alot Farfadet
Mon, February 6th, 2012 12:23pm
look in a mirror if you are happy with what you see then no one can judge you i dont mean the cosmetic looks i mean look into your soul ... a thought provoking poem
Sat, February 11th, 2012 11:24pm
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Thx
Sun, February 12th, 2012 10:56am
Very well written could of used a little bit more length but other than that I enjoyed how you are happy with yourself. If you ever want some help let me know. I've written over hundreds of poems and short stories. Working on a novel now. But keep going. You are doing very well for yourself darlin. -Jaded Beauty
Tue, March 18th, 2014 4:02am
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Maybe we could collaborate on a poem one day.. Always thought about doing that
Wed, March 19th, 2014 5:32pmFacebook Comments
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I think this is poem is very good at the langth it is... I really do like the last like a lot... I feel like it sums up the whole idea of the poem and makes it all flow... Great job :)
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Thanks
Sun, February 5th, 2012 7:06am