Please... Don't Leave

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fan Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

What if the person you have always loved was leaving, and didn't seem to care you were staying? Containing two characters from Naruto, it tells the tale of their goodbye.

Tears stream down my face as I turn towards him, moonlight shining down on his dark blue hair. Since getting out of the academy I have felt useless, especially whenever his uncaring eyes fell on me. But I can’t let him leave.

“If, if you go, I’ll scream.” I threatened, but even to my own ears it sounded like a pathetic plea.

His dark eyes were distant, more so than before the start of the exams. What had happened? Why was he so bent on revenge that he couldn’t even see me?

He took one glance at me, and disappeared in a puff of smoke. I tried to scream, but despair flooded through me. I stood, gaping at the nothingness he left behind.

Then I heard someone appear behind me.

“Thank you.”

“Please…” I whispered, but he was already gone. My whole body quivered, and I fell to my knees. No. No. No.

Tears fell to the ground, and in the distance I could hear him running through the trees.

He’s gone. I couldn’t stop him. He’s gone.


Submitted: March 24, 2010

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Redrawn Infinity

Hmmmm, replace the second "face" in the first sentence with "turn towards" or similar, apart from the, very nice. :D

Tue, April 6th, 2010 8:28pm

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Thank you, I was trying to think of another word, but at that time my mind was quite blank, so I appreciate the help!

Tue, April 6th, 2010 4:10pm

kisa

hey, I really like it. It's like the episode when sasuke goes away! XD You should write more ones like this! XDXDXD

Thu, April 29th, 2010 7:55pm

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thanks :D I'm thinking of writing one possibly about neji, but I suppose we'll see. Also, if you guys like my fanfic writing please feel free to check out famfiction.net/~misahimura, while my booksie will likely be used for more shall we say serious works

Thu, April 29th, 2010 2:25pm

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