Unnamed Poem

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Ok, so this poem I wrote in a dark place. My dad was in hospital and my mum and I were at each others throats. In that section of my life I didn't think I could sink any lower. There are times in life when you feel like this. I can't think of a name for it, so anyone who has a good title please leave a comment.

Darkness in my very clutches,

Curls around my frame,

Covers me in dark ice,

And Pulls me in the rain.

The soft beating stops,

Then everything shuts down,

Following the leaders cries,

A dark hole, Fall I down.

Rain Hammers around,

Black feathers do I shred,

Tears of Ebony escape,

Streaming my pale cheek.

 

By Megan Owens


Submitted: May 24, 2011

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Samu

I like it, it sounds a bit dark, but that's what poetry is about at time, expressing your emotions good or bad.

Tue, May 24th, 2011 11:44pm

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Yeah, i know and yeah it's very dark but Poetry is about expressing emotions and you feel a lot better after you have. :)x

Tue, May 24th, 2011 11:17pm

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MissusMooksii

Very sentimental, well done :D

Fri, May 27th, 2011 1:49am

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Samu

I thought of a name for your poem, I came back to it. You should call it "Black Ice."

Fri, June 10th, 2011 5:35am

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Yeah, I like it! It suits the mood and description! Great name, thanks!

Fri, June 10th, 2011 2:03am

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