what will i do without you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i wrote this poem thinking about my dad. i just need to get all of my emotions out so i wrote about them. it might not make sense to some people but im not the best poet.

Well I wasn't that good at writing poems but here I go 

What am I going to do without you
This pain im feeling till never go away
You let me when I was only young

Theres a hole in my life that will never be fixed
As no on can take your place
You were always the one would listen to me
Any of my problems I could tell you

You made me fell proud of my self 
and filled me with confidence,
You encouraged me to follow my dreams.

I could only ever sing in font of you 
you wouldn't judge, you'd tell me i was a superstar
you said my voice could make people cry with happyness
but now your gone, my voice is gone.
My dreams will never come true.

you told me to stay in school 
and get my education so that 1 day i could have a fantastic life
but i dont think i can with out you
i will always think about you, in everything i do

You left me when I was so young
So what will I dowithout you.
You will never se me grow up,
Tell my boyfriends if you hurt her ill kill you

Who will walk me down the ile
And who will I dance with for my father daughter dance
When my children ask where is there grandfather
What am I going to say

Nearly everything I see reminds me of you
Good times and bad times I'll always love you
I know you'll never be around again 
But I hope its all just a dream and when I wake up you will be here

You left me when I was young 
so what will I do without you
Knowing I will never see you again 
or hear your voice makes my heart ache.

But life goes on
And everything happens for a reason
But for once in my life I cant think properly,
I cant understand why you've gone.

I cant focus anymore
But what worries me the most is where you've gone.
Heaven aint real neither is hell;
So all that's left is complete darkness 

You left me when I was young
So wat will I do without you.

i will always miss you 
and always love you
but i will never forget you...

Submitted: April 22, 2012

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that. was. amazing. you are so good at writing! this was.... so so sad! please, never stop writing, and if this poem is true in your life, don't forget people still care, and love you. and Im sorry if you lost someone you loved. you have talent. that was awesome.

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 12:01am


thank you. i normally to write stories but every now and again i write poems. im glad someone likes my work(well, then again i dont really show it to people lol)

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 1:56pm

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