I tried and cried amidst the rain,
That would help me drain my pains,
I befriend the rain to be my guide,
I knew my tears that it could hide,
I bathed, refreshed, I screamed silence,
I walked by my memories, hence, in the rains.
The droplets filled and burnt my eyes,
What is life? A mirage of lies?
Cobbling them with pools of tears,
Scaring frights and crumbled fears,
Filled with fled and mourning pains,
It rains, and rains. I scream silence.
It blurred my sight, it spilled my heart,
The heart it broke, the heart that’s hurt.
It scorched my heart and my mind,
My eyes that flood, and tears to hide.
I cried in rain, brimming pain,
It made me mad, I grew insane.
Submitted: February 16, 2012
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so cleverly done, love iT!! WONDERFULLY TOLD, VERY UNIQUE TOO!
Thu, February 16th, 2012 11:38pm
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thanks dear
Sat, February 18th, 2012 9:38pm
nice job
Fri, February 17th, 2012 3:38pm
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thanks to all
Sat, February 18th, 2012 9:37pm
Very nice. You're use of words to paint a picture, and express emotions, is amazing. Another great poem. :)
Sat, February 25th, 2012 5:01pm
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thanks dear that u liked it so much. hugs
Sat, February 25th, 2012 9:30am
So you are simple incredible, my dear. You are simply adorable. You are simply the best. This poem says it all. Hugs
Sun, June 3rd, 2012 8:24am
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Ohh thank u so much. U r really so kind
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Marcele Rose
i really like this, great imagery, well written..good job :)
Thu, February 16th, 2012 6:19pmAuthor
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Thnkx
Thu, February 16th, 2012 11:19am