Illusive Moment

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic



The ocean of fantasy tempts  me,

With its crawling dreams alluring me,

Through my eyes, in my brain,

Creates a solitary oasis in my soul

That still waits for you

Amidst the devastated fence of cognition.

The intense dark night

Studded with stars,

Set up the perfect ambience for you and me,

By the silent sea of romance;

I blush alone with my glittered eyes,

I smile mild and look down,

When the breeze starts playing the violin,

Embracing the grass blades and sand beneath,

I looked at your eyes,

In the blue of my illusive moments,

Inside the reflection of your soul.

The ripples unfurls infidelity of my truth,

The rampage of my faith,

Flush through my rampant tears.

I still wait for you,

Along with slow breeze and cool waves,

That you will come and hold me closer

To promise me we will be together forever!


~ “Tears are salty, not more than d sacred waters of the seas blue,

I love you always, not more than every moment, that I miss you.”


Submitted: April 19, 2012

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Wow. *standing ovation* I'm always so impressed. This poem really speaks to me like no other poems can. :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 12:06pm


Ohh! Thank you so much Blackmirror. I feel so good obviously whenever anybody inspires me like this and it has not been a long time I have joined Booksie, so I feel great to believe I found my own family of pen and paper out here, with an unconditional love and happiness! Hugs

Thu, April 19th, 2012 11:36pm


Great stuff this! Love the imagery and complex wordplay. Flows really well and demonstrated true drama and feeling!

Please check out my latest 2 ; Axis and The Tree .... would love your feedback!

Sun, April 29th, 2012 6:52pm


Oh Thanks Rich; After a long time ...nice to see u back. Surely I will check out urs pretty soon

Sun, April 29th, 2012 10:58pm


Excellent written!! I honestly loved this poem and its flow.. marvellous .. what a delight to read some good works

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 3:42pm


thank you for ur kind words

Thu, May 24th, 2012 1:04am


That was absolutely lovely. There are some poems out there that speak to me, but that one SANG to me. Loved it:)

Fri, May 25th, 2012 3:50pm


Ohhh...thank you so much. Its great dat u loved it so much

Fri, May 25th, 2012 9:02am


Hats off, and head reeling, my poetic heart sinks to its knees. You indeed are a genius. This beautiful masterpiece says it all. You are simply the best. Keep writing...

Sat, June 2nd, 2012 3:18pm


Thank u for such inpirations

Wed, June 6th, 2012 4:32am

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