The Inert

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

The Death challenged Life and the Life bows down: leaves the Body and the Soul flies away

The room so dark, black and silent,

Seemed the night’s fighting with the empty

Rooms of thought, persistence and prevalence,

As the depth enmeshed sufferings and pains.

The palette of darkness, poised and poisoned;

I lit the candle with the friction of matchstick,

In a fraction of second, the moment on the fulcrum---

The room looked glorified, bright and better.

The sigh of relief relaxed on my breathes,

My heart counted each and every beat,

The coldness of the stress runs through my spine,

My eyes shone in light. I still fight. And I strive.

I heard the drums of death drooling,

And I shut my eyes to recover,

I sense the reconciliation of my soul and brain,

No urge, no wish, no heart or pain.

Salty droplets adore my eyes,

I want to cry, shout and scream...

I found the candle melting wax,

Light above, beneath is the dark,

I stared to see the melting truth...

Hot, liquefied watery flows,

Hardened by the life and flaws,

Colour or colourless contoured life,

My soul left me, just body was alive.

“‘I’ die... ‘I’ die...”, I prayed within me.

My mourning moan steals my faith,

I carry the blood and germ – ‘’Society’’

And I was left alone on the wheelchair of time,

Awaiting for a hand to travel helpless.


Submitted: February 02, 2012

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pakla

it's powerful.>>

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 1:21pm

moonphish

that was scary stuff....drums of death drooling,,,,there is a phrase that is gonna stick for a while....very intense....love it

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 4:17pm

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thanks Moon that you took out some time and read it and liked it too

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 9:34am

Gagan

Friend, how do you do it?? There is such a power in the flow which you produce with your words, that readers have no options, than to surrender themselves to the flow. Magnetic narration, enigmatic description and a humble salute to your talent.

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 4:33pm

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Oh! Gagan that you give me so much of positive comments, they help me to be motivated and inspired in the right direction. Am happy and proud to possess a friend like you through such a website.

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 9:33am

Shawna

love it!!!!! i'm pressing the like button!!!

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 9:12pm

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Thanks shawna that u liked it :)

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 9:09pm

sherry1

Very intense and moving. Love the ebb and flow of this poem. Great work. :) Sherry

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 12:51pm

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thanks a lot sherry

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 4:55am

Richmaggs

Nice work Shadow - love the drama and suspense of this piece. thanks for the invite!

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 5:33pm

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Thanks Rich for you lovely comments :)

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:18pm

Kyoko96

Intense. Powerful. Intriguing.This poem is so good" **pressing the like button** :D

Sat, February 4th, 2012 3:02am

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Oh! Thank u so much Kyoko... My pleasure

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:11pm

Diva 2012

Love it. You create pictures in the minds of your readers with words such as, the room so dark and silent. It immediately sets the atmosphere/pace of the poem.
Well done

Mon, February 6th, 2012 5:30am

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Thanks diva.:)

Sun, February 5th, 2012 9:47pm

Darklady

wow!! I love this! All the darkness in it, the feeling, the life between... It's well written, love the flow of thoughts... i just can say I Love it!!! great cheers xxx

Tue, February 7th, 2012 5:22pm

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thanks Dark.

Tue, February 7th, 2012 9:54am

Ekeuhie

Deep, strong and weighty words. Sink to the soul. The theme of despair is evident. So are a great poet.

Sun, June 3rd, 2012 1:37pm

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I admire your understanding!

Mon, June 4th, 2012 4:10am

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