...the moist damp weather,
with small water pools here and there,
and shivering cold air running through the spine,
reminds me of you...
your firm palm holding mine in fist, my cheek brushing your shoulder, and your hot breathes on my face;
You held my back in your arms, tried to make the togetherness closer, and I put my face down,
You kissed me on my forehead and clean my face off my thin hair straggles,
I kept my eyes closed and my thin lips trembled in shy...
as we walked together holding hands, for an unknown destination of Peace.
My eyes still try searching for you,
here and there, to and fro,
whenever and everymoment, after the rains...
and I fall in love with your memories again.
I stare at the cloudy sky, I see the wet birds, I blush alone,
I think of you, you and me, and myself...
and tears roll down.
Submitted: January 07, 2012
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this is seriously good! The images in the first verse for me are of a couple in a windswept park on a cold day very much in love! Then the second verse leaves you feeling sad as you realise that all is not as it should be ... Great poem!
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very sweet, sad but beautiful. WONDERFULLY TOLD!! love your awesome style, Thrilling and vivid.
Mon, January 9th, 2012 7:16pmAnother beautiful poem, keep up the good work :D
Mon, January 30th, 2012 11:36amOh.... So emotional and romantic... Dont cry, dear. True love waits beyond the silent stars
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Nanmma
really nice poem.....i liked your style of writing...
Sat, January 7th, 2012 10:10amAuthor
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thanks Nanmma. Try reading my other creations.
Sun, January 8th, 2012 10:36pm