The Rains

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

It is when I was walking by the memory lanes, I had spent with my best man in the world.

...the moist damp weather,

with small water pools here and there,

and shivering cold air running through the spine,

reminds me of you...

your firm palm holding mine in fist, my cheek brushing your shoulder, and your hot breathes on my face;

You held my back in your arms, tried to make the togetherness closer, and I put my face down,

You kissed me on my forehead and clean my face off my thin hair straggles,

I kept my eyes closed and my thin lips trembled in shy...

as we walked together holding hands, for an unknown destination of Peace.

My eyes still try searching for you,

here and there, to and fro,

whenever and everymoment, after the rains...

and I fall in love with your memories again.

I stare at the cloudy sky, I see the wet birds, I blush alone,

I think of you, you and me, and myself...

and tears roll down.


Submitted: January 07, 2012

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Nanmma

really nice poem.....i liked your style of writing...

Sat, January 7th, 2012 10:10am

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thanks Nanmma. Try reading my other creations.

Sun, January 8th, 2012 10:36pm

Richmaggs

this is seriously good! The images in the first verse for me are of a couple in a windswept park on a cold day very much in love! Then the second verse leaves you feeling sad as you realise that all is not as it should be ... Great poem!

Please check out my latest poem that is called quite unusually, Ctrl-Alt-Delete ....would appreciate any comments or thoughts!!

Sun, January 8th, 2012 12:58pm

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Ahh that was really a precious comment for me Rich..thanks dat you added ur valuable time to read my creation. will surely visit urs..and would love to comment ...

Sun, January 8th, 2012 10:34pm

glitter snow426

very sweet, sad but beautiful. WONDERFULLY TOLD!! love your awesome style, Thrilling and vivid.

Mon, January 9th, 2012 7:16pm

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thanks once again :)

Mon, January 9th, 2012 11:22am

Imagine Words

Another beautiful poem, keep up the good work :D

Mon, January 30th, 2012 11:36am

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Thanks dear

Mon, January 30th, 2012 3:39am

Ekeuhie

Oh.... So emotional and romantic... Dont cry, dear. True love waits beyond the silent stars

Sun, June 3rd, 2012 8:01am

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wow ....ur words sound like glitters

Wed, June 6th, 2012 4:25am

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