The Rains
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Poem by: Shadows of Memories
...the moist damp weather,
with small water pools here and there,
and shivering cold air running through the spine,
reminds me of you...
your firm palm holding mine in fist, my cheek brushing your shoulder, and your hot breathes on my face;
You held my back in your arms, tried to make the togetherness closer, and I put my face down,
You kissed me on my forehead and clean my face off my thin hair straggles,
I kept my eyes closed and my thin lips trembled in shy...
as we walked together holding hands, for an unknown destination of Peace.
My eyes still try searching for you,
here and there, to and fro,
whenever and everymoment, after the rains...
and I fall in love with your memories again.
I stare at the cloudy sky, I see the wet birds, I blush alone,
I think of you, you and me, and myself...
and tears roll down.
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really nice poem.....i liked your style of writing...
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thanks Nanmma. Try reading my other creations.
this is seriously good! The images in the first verse for me are of a couple in a windswept park on a cold day very much in love! Then the second verse leaves you feeling sad as you realise that all is not as it should be ... Great poem!
Please check out my latest poem that is called quite unusually, Ctrl-Alt-Delete ....would appreciate any comments or thoughts!!
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Ahh that was really a precious comment for me Rich..thanks dat you added ur valuable time to read my creation. will surely visit urs..and would love to comment ...
very sweet, sad but beautiful. WONDERFULLY TOLD!! love your awesome style, Thrilling and vivid.
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thanks once again :)
Another beautiful poem, keep up the good work :D
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Thanks dear
Oh.... So emotional and romantic... Dont cry, dear. True love waits beyond the silent stars
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wow ....ur words sound like glitters
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