untitled for it's sake

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

the undetachable


You don’t leave me alone,

You don’t learn to move yourself,

You dull and gloom, dark, uninspired,

What are you scared of my dear?

Or have you fallen in love with my soul?

Why can’t you walk alone,

And enjoy a walk by the path?

Why can’t you learn to stand alone

And be yourself and strong?

Why can’t you think all by yourself

And dream too?

Are you dead or pretend to be so?

What are you fear of and be so scared?

Why can’t you understand, you are not cared?

Are you life or emotional insane?

Why can’t you go and leave me to myself?

Why can’t you be identified and recognised?

You lame, inactive: I just don’t need you.

How could you be locked by yourself,

Till the night fights with dark?

Why can’t you move on and safely let yourself park?

I shout and scream at you so long,

Why can’t you just flee?

Why can’t you breathe and be happy

Without  me?

Why can’t you leave me and away somewhere go?

-‘’because ‘am born to be your dull gloom shadow!”

Submitted: January 31, 2012

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Wow! another impressive punch of reality, with craft and ease. You are very natural in your thoughts and honest with your opinions...in other words , a very Impressive Writer.

Tue, January 31st, 2012 10:43pm


Thank you so much Gagan.As always you inspire me so much

Tue, January 31st, 2012 10:28pm


love this poem it speaks to me. keep up the good work. fan me on here!!!!

Tue, January 31st, 2012 11:26pm


You r now my Fannnnnnn!!! thanks Shawna for your sweet words by the way. :)

Tue, January 31st, 2012 10:16pm


That was very interesting... I really do like the ending and how it is one's gloom dull shadow... I wasn't expecting that at all... Great job!

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:32pm


Feeling out of the world as u praise me!

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:16pm


Wow!!! He cant help it. He is a zombie and a love-slave. You have stolen his heart

Sun, June 3rd, 2012 1:49pm


I loved your comment!

Mon, June 4th, 2012 4:07am

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