This is one of those "depends where you put the commas" poems.
The meaning is all over the place, depending on where you pause

My View

 

I look in wonder

At the world

I see

And knowing that

I will never be free

I sit and watch

My pen

And me

 

 

bcm


Submitted: February 02, 2019

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hullabaloo22

Short but says a lot. Nice work!

Sun, February 3rd, 2019 7:15pm

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Sometimes you can say more by saying less.

Sun, February 3rd, 2019 12:42pm

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