Winter Breeze

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
There are 2 kids who love winter. They never had a blizzard in town before. So one day they had up to 12 inches of snow. They loved it and had school off. They went sleding the first time in their new town. They love the snow.

Submitted: January 16, 2008

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Submitted: January 16, 2008

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Winter
Breeze

Shahed Khan


Illustrated By:

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Winter

Breeze


To my entire Family and Friends,
For everything you taught me.
- Shahed Khan
Winter

Breeze

“Mother!” said Louis, “I’m heading outside towards the backyard, and I will be playing with Sarah”. “OKAY?” “Sure”. Mother was in the kitchen making dinner. While Louis and Sarah were outside in the backyard they were playing in the big white fluffy snow. They started screaming and yelling of amusement.

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They started to make snow angels, mini-snowman, and snowballs. After a while Louis started to make a huge snowball, the size of a snowman’s bottom. He dashed it at Sarah’s hip and missed. They both started to laugh. “Louis, Dinner’s ready!” mother said, “Coming!” said Louis taking a deep breath from the big breeze.
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Louis and Sarah dodged to the patio and up the stairs to the door and wiped their feet on the Welcome Mat and give out a loud sigh while entering. “That was some fun” said Sarah. “Oh yeah that was!” commenting her thought. “Get your jackets and gloves off; meet us on the dinner table in less than 4 minutes” Mother said while carrying Ravioli and Garlic Bread to the Dining Table. “We know Mom” said Louis while rolling his eyes. In 3 minutes we reached the dining table and started to wait on Jim.

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Jim is Louis’s elder brother. Jim loves to tease Louis. It took a while but you can then see Jim’s footsteps coming from the stairs. Jim wasn’t speaking until he reached the dinner table. He was listening to his MP3 player. “Jimmy Anthony Phillips!” said Mother all in one deep breath “You know the table manners, now take that out of your ears and put it away before I take that away!” said Mother again. Jim took it off and sighed.

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We said our prayers and started to eat. When we were done eating Sarah went home and told Louis that she’ll see him tomorrow. When Sarah left Jim started to tease Louis by screaming “Louis and Sarah sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. MOM!! Louis yelled from the top of his lungs. What? Mother had said. “Tell Jim to stop making fun of me!” said Louis again. JIMMY!” Mother had said again.

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When Louis changed into his Pajamas he said his prayers and looked outside it was still snowing under his estimation it was about 4 inches of snow. Out of his window he could see the half pieces of the big round snowball the size of a monster truck wheel that he threw at Sarah but missed.

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The next morning Louis woke up early and looked outside. It was a huge dump of snow covering his grass. This time it was about 2 feet. He ran down stairs and started to go towards the television when he saw mother, and father there. Mother told him “Your one lucky charm”. He replied “what? B-b-but why?”
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I Looked at the T.V. and focused at the News Reporter. “We have an urgent snowfall which leads to 2.3 feet of snow on all highways. All schools in the Northwest suburbs are closed! Here’s a brief News Report from Joe Collins”. Louis was amazed. “I’m going to call up Sarah and ask if we can go up to Fort Pilling.”
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“Hello?” Sarah replied in excitement. “Sarah! It’s me Louis, are you watching the News right now?” Louis said in one full breath of happiness. “No, I’m having breakfast right now, but why?” Sarah said with confusion. “There’s a huge blizzard outside, and we have no school today!” It was pure silence until you hear a spoon fall in a bowl of cereal on the phone. “Are you joking?!” Sarah screamed. “No, I promise turn on the T.V. and find out!”
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“Hold on which channel?” Sarah asked Louis. Louis replied “Channel 5, Early Traffic Weather Forecast.”“Okay, I’m watching.” There was silence again from the phone. You can hear Sarah’s jaw fall down. Whenever she is silent that means she is really happy. “Oh Lord. I can’t believe this! We haven’t got a day off of School on a week day ever!” said Sarah with excitement. “So, Are you coming or not?” asked Louis while scratching his head. “Yes, of course! Let me change my clothes and tell me Mom.”
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(Ding-Dong) “Hey, ready to head outside?” said Louis with a pink face. “Sure, what are you waiting for?” said Sarah looking inside the house to check what everyone was doing. “Okay, let’s go!” They both started to walk down Prairie Dr. It was a wonderful time. Louis and Sarah were throwing snowballs back and forth. When Sarah ducked down to pick up a snowball, Louis had one already and aimed for Sarah’s jacket he threw it fast. When Sarah turned around she got hit with the snowball. They both started to laugh. “Hey, now I have a pink nose also.” They turned on Roots Rd. and went up the hill. “This is some pain, I can’t take it anymore!” said Louis trying to hold on tightly. “C’mon we’re almost there”.
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After a while they reached the top of the gigantic hill. They were ready for the first time. They sat down on the snowboard and went down super fast down the hill. They were screaming and shouting like last time. Once they were in the middle of the hill Louis fell off and started to roll down the hill. Sarah started to laugh out loud. After a couple of hours, it started to get dark and they had to leave people it had turned dark. So they both walked home and they both went to their own house. They waited until the next day.
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The next day, Louis brushed, changed his clothes, and had breakfast then headed towards the T.V. to check the temperature. “Whoa! -4 degrees.” He was amazed; it was getting colder and colder every day. Also Louis was getting happier and happier from the temperature falling. He went outside on a Saturday morning. He went by a pond that was about a block away from his house. He had his ice-skating shoes on. He put one foot down and checked if the water was frozen or not. “Yep, it’s frozen for sure.” Said Louis. He started to spin on the ice. He fell down a couple of times. He was embarrassed if anyone was watching. He thought it would be a little awkward. About 10 minutes passed and he heard voices coming closer and closer. He heard “Is that you Louis?”

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After a while he see’s Sarah there. She also had her skating shoes. She said “I called you but your mother said that you were here, so I just came by to play”. “Okay, come fast I need to show you something really cool”. She was obnoxious to see him. “Look at this” said Louis three times to get her attention. Louis did a bunny hop and a snow flow where he ski’s so fast and stops immediately, where all the layer of ice on top fly’s. It went all on Sarah’s face. She said “Oh, no you didn’t!” She grabs a big snowball and whipped it at Louis. They started to giggle.

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They both started to make big letters in the ice pond. L + S WERE HERE! (Louis+ Sarah)They were in big bold letters if you were on an airplane you can probably read it. Louis had went over Sarah’s house for a sleep over. When they got in they went up to Sarah's room and checked for the weather forecast online. They checked Sunday, and Monday. Sunday was snow flurries. But Monday wasSunny. They were sad and happy. They were sad becausethey will miss the blizard.Happy becaue they don't want to waste their time.

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