A secret feeling I can’t express,
Without expressing I can’t repress
To express it is really hard
While repressing it- I’ve become a bard.
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Wanna express my love to her all the time
But it’s so hard to express even a single time.
Don’t know the way to vent my love
The only hope is God above.
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There is no medium, no outlet
To call my love for a simple date,
Can’t say my love to my love,
Though she is gentle like a dove.
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Social bounds- so hard to break
So many barriers- tough nut to crack
Circumstances- never went my way
Could see the hope just fading away
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All because I have no right
For I’m disable, I have no might.
Submitted: August 31, 2008
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This is for Anna Therese,
First of all sorry i deleted your comment by mistake. Since I'm new at booksie, i'm not familiar with all its feature so it happened that your as well as mine comment got deleted. :(
But I could fully understand the concern u expressed in your comment.From your comment it seems that u assume that my love knows about my feelings for her but its not like that. She doesn't know at all- nor could i express it to her. Thats what i meant in my first stanza. Hope i could explain my position to u but i'm too... I don't know what to say. I really can't at this open forum where every one could see/read. Hope u understand....Thanks once again for showing so much care for me.
air is an essential life ingredient and I visit after a comment you left at Katie's page.Whatever your 'disability' you certainly shout with high volumes of ability in this poem. If your 'unexpressable power' has channelled into you becoming a 'bard',then this 'power' has done the world a favour,it needs the song of your loving soul :)
Mon, December 1st, 2008 11:10pmNice poem by a lover who feels helpless to convey his love to his beloved. Keep writing and updating me, I will surely follow your all that works which my server allows me to ;)
Till then bye, take care and keeps your pen moving :))
Nicely penned poem which really reflects the frustration of not being able to be just you with this lady of your affection.Keep me updated on your excellent writing.
Fri, December 14th, 2012 1:30pmhi,this is first time m going thru ur poems really heart touching.excellent writing.
Waow this is my fav poems
real heart touching poem
I can actually feel the pain that you feel through this poem
i hope you get all the Happiness you deserve in life..
Please do tell me if theres anything i can do for you...
Ah, so glad you invited me to read. I just read your Valentine poem. Then scrolled to this one. This was meant to be.
Your expressed your hurt feelings very well. So many can relate to barriers and not being able to communicate. Some find it easier to vent to strangers. It's more comfortable for no fear of being judged. If they do, we can just move on. With family or friends we have to live with the fact they know everyday. Making it difficult to face them.
Far as your disability, I have a passion for individuals with physical, developmental and mental disabilities. I worked many years with them. Some people make us feel as if people with disabilities have no right or might, as you stated,
I'm here to let you know, you are special, unique, and strong. I'm currently working on a rough draft to express just that. Also to try to break the barriers that are attached to the population.
Don't ever doubt yourself. You are perfect just the way you are!
If you are interested, I would like to converse with you through email. Or if there's anything I can do? I'm glad we met, thank you and God Bless.
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Thanks so much for your detailed review and your concern and encouragement by you. I'm deeply overawed by your comment. :)
Yes. I would surely would like to communicate with you through email or FB. Just give me yours or I'll leave you mine on your profile.
this is sensible and somewhere I can relate to it because at some or other point I feel the same I mean disable or just helpless being..though these feelings go with wind but still reside deep.Well executed :)
Fri, March 8th, 2013 5:02pmgreat poem!!!!
Sat, March 15th, 2014 5:07pmWow, fantastic rhymes. I like your subject and metaphors.
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ok, mnay times we project our yearnings 'out there' so to speak to people we think we are not worthy of.
Thu, September 4th, 2008 4:21pmWe do this because we are affriad of love or to be loved because we are affraid of the attachmants that break when we cling to it. Emotional attachments always break, when we become open within ourselves and have more feeling within, we attract that to us.
When we are needy and fearful we become attracted to those we may possibly never be able to have, it is what that type of energy draws to it self. The universal laws are as such; like attracts like.
You have a physical dissability but that is not what keeps you stagnant. It is the inner fear. When you decide to over come the lower emotions you will climb out of that place of self denial. You will have possibilities and then probabilities ^_^
This a very, very sweet poem by the way, but at the same time it is full of self doubt.
I am very pleased to meet you. and this a fine place to spread your wings. You can begin to add more aspiration to your thoughts as you write and in turn bring more of that to yoru self.
I would be happy to hear from you about your dissability, and elaborate on distant healing, I am not able to cure such things that are of karmic order but I do balance the energy centers and clear away the congestion from your outer astral and etheric vehicles.
my name is katie and welcome to booksie dynamic
have a wonderful day :)
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Thanks Katie for reading my poem & your comments. I would surely contact u through e-mail and at the same time i would post another poem soon which would elaborate or extend the topic on which i have written my first poem 'Strangulated Feeling'. Thanks once again & take care :)
Thu, September 4th, 2008 8:41pm