Poem by: shaleheen
god, devotion, tide, grasp, soon, ended, benevolence, credence, hasten, zippy-
Submitted: December 28, 2012
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I'm not left with a death feeling upon reading this, but an excellent feeling!
thanks GP for your nice comment..
jiji chocolate sweet
oh wow!! very sad yet beautiful you really did good with this one!!!! like you did with every piece of yours. I really love your poems!!!
thanks for appreciation...
Really good friend! I love the deep meaning behind every one of your poems. This one well written and the use of language is really effective. Good work! KMU on any future work please!
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I didnt get the feeling of death but a feeling of testament and revaluation of one self but very good piece
Saleem Akhtar Malik
A very touching poem. You've expressed your feelings very simply and with impact. I like your poem
Its like a prayer of gratitude to God, ready to face even death.
Part 1 of 3 due limited space.
When we begin each day through faith with no trust in man, pray to the Father asking for direction; and then began our day- - and as we travel each day our minds try to stay focused on God while always asking for more understanding, better direction and even help as our only supplier in life because of so many years of very nothing other than non-stop difficulties being just as any men of God all through history and today being very few just as written. So what do we do through hard times? Just as Paul we keep our faith and run the race set before us.
This poem was my first stop, and I am no poet. As human beings we all take everything according to our own mind in uncountable different ways through the psychological control of the god of this world being the father of lies and prince and power of the air who distributes his false security, beliefs, thoughts and ways into the minds of billions worldwide. Therefore, there truly is no difference between a believer, a non-believers, an atheists, Islamic, Buddha, Wicca or any belief on this entire planet because the only true God and creator of eternity very clearly states to all believers on this planet that this whole world has been deceived in Revelation 12:9 with the most unbelieved added words from Psalms 14:2-3 and 53:2-3 being pure words of our Lord as written in Psalms 12:6 that over three billion believers refuse to believe along with uncountable verses on how we are to love one another as Christ loved us --- yet my life with 24 years past ever since God came to me has left me zero brethren or sisters along with being steadily murdered each day greatly through these past six years while being only a direct student of God with only my Lord who is The Word as my teacher because just as He being Christ could do nothing by himself without looking to the Father, neither can I. Therefore as Christ looked only to His Head being The Father, so do I because He left examples through His faith and suffering on how we as His Body being the only true church of God without the buildings of man where Satan dwells having nothing to do with the Body are to follow only our Head and never man --- yet we live within a whole worlds society, population and civilization that just believes what they want to believe through their pride which goes before destruction.
First I will give the words from just two verses none, no, not one believers believes.
“The Lord looked down from heaven upon the children of men, to see if there were any that did understand, and seek God. They are all gone aside, they are all together become filthy: there is none that doeth good, no, not one. (Psalms 14:2-3)-(KJV)
The KJV has been my primary Bible for over two decades, but as a student of God through my hundreds of writings and the use of computer, I read many and can use a variety when spiritually led for the clearest and ‘easy to read’ words. The KJV, ERV,GNT, Phillips and The Message are what I use most.
I prayed, so let’s discuss your poem from what God speaks because I am no longer of this world having zero association with man, woman or any belief on earth because my only trust, lead and belief are ‘The Word’ with Christ as my Head.
For any man of God or person with great interest in the meaning and flow of words, twelve months could easily be spent on 12 short lines within a poem, so to ease time while using God’s own words, I will use this poem in the form of puzzle pieces to form meanings according to the Words of our Lord.
A Death Feeling
‘Passage departs every instant till death.
‘I gratify to hold dear with earth’s comeliness
‘Oh! My darling red rose florescence’s for you!
The following 22 verses give glory to God for all things including what man can never know.
“To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven:
A time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted;
A time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance;
A time to cast away stones, and a time to gather stones together; a time to embrace, and a time to refrain from embracing;
A time to get, and a time to lose; a time to keep, and a time to cast away;
A time to rend, and a time to sew; a time to keep silence, and a time to speak;
A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war, and a time of peace.
What profit hath he that worketh in that wherein he laboureth?
I have seen the travail, which God hath given to the sons of men to be exercised in it.
He hath made every thing beautiful in his time: also he hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.
I know that there is no good in them, but for a man to rejoice, and to do good in his life.
And also that every man should eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour, it is the gift of God.
I know that, whatsoever God doeth, it shall be for ever: nothing can be put to it, nor any thing taken from it: and God doeth it, that men should fear before him.
That which hath been is now; and that which is to be hath already been; and God requireth that which is past.
And moreover I saw under the sun the place of judgment, that wickedness was there; and the place of righteousness, that iniquity was there.
I said in mine heart, God shall judge the righteous and the wicked: for there is a time there for every purpose and for every work.
I said in mine heart concerning the estate of the sons of men, that God might manifest them, and that they might see that they themselves are beasts.
For that which befalleth the sons of men befalleth beasts; even one thing befalleth them: as the one dieth, so dieth the other; yea, they have all one breath; so that a man hath no preeminence above a beast: for all is vanity.
All go unto one place; all are of the dust, and all turn to dust again.
Who knoweth the spirit of man that goeth upward, and the spirit of the beast that goeth downward to the earth?
Wherefore I perceive that there is nothing better, than that a man should rejoice in his own works; for that is his portion: for who shall bring him to see what shall be after him? (Ecclesiastes 3:1-22)-(KJV)
‘Is it the ease cadence of one else?
The meaning of this word as a noun being a series of sounds having a regular rise and fall in intensity with its synonyms being beat, cadence, measure, and meter is hard for me to understand, so I will pass it by.
‘I have an err of passion while I hit the road-
“Forty years long was I grieved with this generation, and said, It is a people that do err in their heart, and they have not known my ways: (Psalms 95:10)
“For I know that after my death ye will utterly corrupt yourselves, and turn aside from the way which I have commanded you; and evil will befall you in the latter days; because ye will do evil in the sight of the Lord, to provoke him to anger through the work of your hands. (Deuteronomy 31:29)-(KJV)
‘Oh! God how roses become fade!
“Could you conceit?
There are many conceit quotes, therefore another baffle to my mind while never saying you are wrong in any way, but rather I just don’t grasp.
‘Oh! God how much credence I grasp from you!!
‘Benevolence – Armour – Inspiration!
“The Lord said, “These people claim to worship me, but their words are meaningless, and their hearts are somewhere else. Their religion is nothing but human rules and traditions, which they have simply memorized. (Isaiah 29:13)
“For both prophet and priest are profane; yea, in my house have I found their wickedness, saith the Lord. (Jeremiah 23:11)
“Therefore, behold, I, even I, will utterly forget you, and I will forsake you, and the city that I gave you and your fathers, and cast you out of my presence: And I will bring an everlasting reproach upon you, and a perpetual shame, which shall not be forgotten. (Jeremiah 23:39-40
Time and tide hasten so zippy-
My devotion should be ended very soon.
According to God through His words I have written regarding the way God sees all civilization, all have always been misled through deception just as these words from Jeremiah clearly speak.
“We lie down in our shame, and our confusion covereth us: for we have sinned against the Lord our God, we and our fathers, from our youth even unto this day, and have not obeyed the voice of the Lord our God. (Jeremiah 3:25)-(KJV)
What does our Lord say about believers losing their devotion?
“Then you will be arrested and handed over to be punished and killed. People all over the world will hate you because you believe in me. During that time many believers will lose their faith. They will turn against each other and hate each other. Many false prophets will come and cause many people to believe things that are wrong. There will be so much more evil in the world that the love of most believers will grow cold. (Matthew 24:9-12)-(ERV)
I could easily tell you my hardships with hunger, no funds and everything headed for the drain when there is no paid bills; but I have learned through many years that all the believers lip love is just as God says – Hypocrites! Therefore I have learned and am still learning to never trust or expect anything from man; and believers know not God for God is love they have not beyond their tongue JUST AS OUR Lord tells all believers, but they do not believe who they believe in—period.
1 John 4:7-8 is God with 1 John 3:14-17 being all believers who God sees as murderers who see themselves as self-righteous.
I made a friendly comment in never putting you down, but rather just using the words of God as some explanation for your well written poem. So do you detest or hate me as these words of Christ speak and have been proven in my life?
“If ye were of the world, the world would love his own: but because ye are not of the world, but I have chosen you out of the world, therefore the world hateth you. (John 15:19)-(KJV)
I only ask because all I know from brothers and sisters worldwide is being murdered by them all daily.
Forgive any wrong words or mistakes because when tired, hungry and irritable, nothing is easy.
I shall rest, and then read more of your writings.
May God be with you.
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Interesting read :O
Great poem but I don't know if this is fate as someone on this very same day that I knew has died :P Either way great read thanks for leading me here.
I believe you meant "concede" not "conciet", but I loved this one as well. Other than a minor possible spelling error I do believe this is perfect as is.
Gift Of Noni
I like this. It is both an intimate message whose true meaning would only be known to its intended, but still so common to us all.
venturing into drawing ? :)
Love walking in front of death again, do you need to connect these two ?
Very nice...it is so deep and sad.....specially I loved the way the words has been used over here....marvellous ...
The art is an astounding visual aid to this piece, and I believe the poem with the sketch belong together. This piece is enriched in the heart of the artist. Thank you, my friend of the pen.
Sir Biswajit Saha
Comments from others have told, the every possible things.
thanks ... biswajit...
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