Poem by: shaleheen
Submitted: January 11, 2013
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There is nothing in this life better than true love, and your words express it well. If all human beings as male and female could just do as written in your poem, we would have a world of happiness rather than the darkness with division worldwide.
nice poem and lovely presentation.
Wow! I like how you embedded the poem in a picture:) I like this poem, thanks for sharing, Shaleheen:)
The third stanza is awesome. Very interesting concept. Other parts appear a bit awkward but besides that, good job!
gret poem , cool how you put it inside a picture i seem to but as right before everything in my mind lol :)
superb!! simple yet stupendous :)
ahh !! .. soo, true and nice .
i really like this one .
and the way you represent this .. very good :): ) TC
Loved it! :)
I can definitely relate to this poem. You captured the essence of what love is with this poem. How did you embed the poem in a picture like that? It gives me ideas for future poems that I write.
aaahhhh, very heartfelt, warm cozy cute! GREAT WORK, truly special, deeply loving!
This was super great! One of your best.
wow this is amazing !!! :) i love ur work :)
Short, sweet and romantic. I love the picture/poetry combination. Well done and much enjoyed.
Very short, cute & lovable poem, loved it !
jiji chocolate sweet
that was a really great piece I loved it!! even though it was short it didn't lack the beauty of all your poems. great job!!!
Great Poem, bro. I really like the background you chose here. The beach is, by far, my favorite place on this planet! I often associate love with nature, myself.
Maybe we are modern-day transcendentalists
Thanks for sharing this.
This is so sweet, touching, and beautiful. Even though it was short and simple, the emotion flowed through every word perfectly. Well done...MPB
Gift Of Noni
Flows like the sea brushing the shore.
Beautiful. Hard to say much else. It had excellent flow. I think I also picked up a bit of rhythm in there.
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